Here are some of my ideas, but I'm not picky and don't mind.
(view spoiler)[So I had this really good idea that popped into my head after listening to Cop Car by Keith Urban.
Girl A is a good girl. She gets good grades. Guy A is a bad boy. He commits a crime and kidnaped Girl A. They are in the run. One night the cops find them. She denies everything the cops says. The cops believe her and let them both go. She doesn't see Guy A anymore. He left her. She was broken hearted. Until one day they go on vacation. She sees him. Then he commits a bigger crime that effects them both. Will she turn him in?
I would like to be the girl.
Someone who can play a bad boy would be nice.
Detail I want someone who make become more detail. (hide spoiler)](view spoiler)[I have this idea about this girl who lost her memory and she goes back to her old life a year afterwards and still doesn't have her memory so she goes to school and no one talks to her. Her boyfriend sees her and wants to know what she knows. She doesn't like him. When she needs someone.Will she except the help? Will she get her memories back. (hide spoiler)](view spoiler)[You know of the story of Red Riding Hood. Wrong. Little Red Riding Hood has goes to grandmas house. Like the normal story. The big bad wolf turns out to be a werewolf who tries killing them. The axe man is a werewolf hunter in disguise. He kills the werewolf. He must of not a done a good job. Some years later.The werewolf is the new student at a high school. Red Riding Hood is now this a regular girl in school. She isn't cool,but has two best friends. They do everything together. She thinks the new kid is a stuck up jerk. He is,but he is drawn to Red. He doesn't know why. He forgot the scent of the little girl. They fall in love and he tells her what he is. She doesn't believe,but she does. She ran away from him because he tired killing her. Sometime later she excepts it. She wants to be turned to live with him forever. The hunter comes back ready finish the job he started. (hide spoiler)](view spoiler)[All anyone wants is to be normal. Double goes for Girl A. She wants to fit in. That will never happen. She is a vampire. She stays keeps it low at school. Correction she is a Vampire Princess. She is being forced to marry another vampire who she doesn't even know. Guy A is the new kid at school. He is a jock. He fits right in with everybody else. Except he made one mistake. He decide to sit at the lunch table make friends with Girl A. She doesn't trust him at all. Then she realizes she likes him. He likes hurt. One day on a hiking trip a vampire hunter shoots and misses hitting him. She fights with herself to change him. She didn't want to lose him. Now he is a vampire. What she did was forbidden. Now they have to keep it a secret. With hunters and rules. Will they be able to stay together. (hide spoiler)](view spoiler)[This is one is based off of 50 Shades of Grey the characters are well at least some of them are. No we wouldn't do any hard core romance. I will explain more of it to you.
Six years ago Lillian Kylee Grey went missing more so she ran away. She left everything and started over some place else. No one knows why she left. She left her past behind her and thats where she wants everything to stay in the past where it belongs. Until one day her past collides with her future. How can she keep everything to herself when she meets the one person who she always falls in love with all over again. Then one day her secret is out about who she is. Will the one person who she loves stay beside her or leave her because of who she is? (hide spoiler)](view spoiler)[The year is 3024 and the world is rule by a new species called the Perfects. The Perfects are and alien/human hybrid. Each perfect has a special ability and talent that use. Humans are extinct. Or that's what they think. Humans have to hide because they can't fit in with the Perfects. Most humans are barley living.
Each Perfect is driected if they find a human they have to bring to the Dome where they would be transformed. One day the bad boy popular Perfect went stumble across a human girl on the run for life. He takes her to the Dome. The human girl gets transformed. Little did he know about the corrupt ways of the government until he is made to take care of the girl until she adjusts to her new life.
The government secerts he finds out.
She's confused and has no memory on what happened but she is a danger to the public with her ablitlies that no one has.
Can they stop the government before it's to late? (hide spoiler)](view spoiler)[Okay so I have this idea that I want to write a more about on my own. So I need someone to help spark ideas on how to write it this idea.
Its August 7th 1888 when the famous killings of Jack the Ripper began. No one knows who he is or why he is doing it. Girl A is young and naive even when the killings start. In the Whitechapel District there is a new guy in town. No one knows anything about Guy A. Guy A is demon. Guy is also Jack the Ripper. When Girl finds Guy A can she resist him. Can she believe he has a good heart? Or will she be his next victim?
I want to be Girl A
I need someone who can play that mysterious bad boy
I want someone detail
Remember I can only be detail if the other person tries to be or I won't get my brain juice working. (hide spoiler)](view spoiler)[I'm suppose to be evil. Don't you see?
Girl A is a witch princess who was born into a powerful bloodline. Everything points to her being evil. She is very confuse on what to do. She wants to be good. She hates the dark powers growing inside of her everyday. She fights it off but the pain becomes unbearable. What is evil anyways? Until one day she meet Guy A. Well you see Guy A is evil dark and mysterious. He kidnapps Girl A to be his queen. Guy A teaches her to let the go of the darkness inside her. He teaches her how to be evil. Will Girl A relaize that she needs to stop running from her destiny and trying to be something she not? Or will she fight it?
I know this is a killer here I really would love to be Girl A.
Another thing is I'm trying to become more detail so I would love someone who can push me to be detail.
Also someone who is active I understand people have life's outside of goodreads.
Anyone? (hide spoiler)]
"So how is the car coming along?" Sam asked.
Naomi smiled and curled into the bed.
IKR and then people post saying how some people don't try to play guys. Well I do and I want to become a better writer, but guys are absolutely not my forte.
She nodded her head lightly quickly falling back to sleep.
Naomi opened her eyes tiredly sniffling some. "Dean I'm sorry." She sneezed. Her eyes closed again though she was still awake.
I'm not that good either wit guys(to me mine sound like girls),but I'm trying to get better and doubles just makes things fair. Most of the time people argue who is going to be a girl and I try avoiding that as much as possible.
Sam nodded his head in agreement. "Okay take your time." He said.
Naomi started to cough against him. She clenched his shirt in her fists. She had a light fever. She was sick from not listening to Dean earlier.
"Or maybe Wyatt just got it from Naomi." Sam said with a smile. "You two look cute together."
"That's a hard one." Sam said with a smile. "I want to say Wyatt,but I haven't spent much time with Naomi."
"I know don't feel bad for me. You were lucky to get out unharmed." Sam said. "Both Naomi and Wyatt are really stubborn." He said eyeing Naomi who looked peaceful. "I wish they could be this peaceful all the time."
((It's fine. :) I'm getting 3 of them out.))
Dakota looked up at him. Getting paid to be a friend would be wrong. She sighed a little bit. She didn't like the idea of that. It could ruin her reputation. The thought of that made her sick to her stomach turn. "You know what I want. I want to be know as this. I don't want to go hungry. I want a good life. Those are all dreams and dreams don't get you anywhere in life." She whispered quietly. Getting up off the ground and swiping the dirt off of herself. Not using his hand.
"I don't want to get paid for just being a friend." She said looking up in his eyes. Then he mentioned food. The one things she wanted so desperately. Hearing the rumble in her stomach growl loud at the mention of food. "I would...." Catching herself not sure if it was right to do this while her family was starving at home wondering if she was making money. "I would love some food." She whispered softly forcing herself to say. If she didn't come home with money then her family would be upset at her. Trying to push this thought away.
Then she heard a loud ruckus going on. Guards were coming early. She saw men being escorted out of their homes. Some of the people were disobeying so they got whipped. She heard the cries and screams. Backing against Landon shaking a little bit. "They came early." Whispering softly. It wasn't a surprise no doubt her mind, but she didn't get to say goodbye. Knowing if guards saw her alone that could be bad. As the guards carried off the prisoners. They started to announce the new maids for the castle.
"Dakota Elliot." Continuing to go down the list. "These girls have two day time to report to the castle to begin their new lives." The last guard left. Dakota didn't realize what was happening. She crumpled to the ground. Tears came down her face shaking. This wasn't happening. Breathe she needed to breath.
"Landon..." Words wouldn't form in her mouth. There wasn't anything she could say really. She was terrified. "I'm going to be maid. I'm scared. I don't know what to do." She trailed off. There wasn't anything she could tons of families were out of their houses scared. She couldn't help them and neither could Landon.
((Thanks for understanding, also what I meant by backing up into him she stumbled into him. But I can work with that.))
"I want to be able to move my legs." He sighed some. "Other than that I'm fine."
"Yeah I convinced her to get some sleep." Sam said.
"I don't know she hasn't come down here." Sam said. "She was really tired."
Sam looked at Dean. "She probably doesn't know how to work through them and shutting everyone out and 'moving on' is her way of coping. But she has you and her sister who are here to help her. I know when Jessica died you let me know that you were here for me. Maybe she needs to be reminded that."
Sam looked at him. "I think she's afraid of letting you in or anyone. That's going to take time. Naomi really likes you, but she has problems she needs to work through." Sam said trying to make Dean feel better.
She curled into him she looked peaceful.
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