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Naomi sighed. "I'm tired,confused, and broken. Happy I said I was broken and upset. I can't move on from the past and I'm telling feeling like I'm breaking. So yeah you're probably right I would give into the darkness"

Naomi looked at the lake. "I'm not upset." She whispered softly lying. She was doing what she did to everyone push them away.

"How do you know? Do you honestly think I'm not strong enough to fight it?" Naomi said. "I can fight the darkness." She said. Deep down she wasn't sure if she could or not.

Naomi nodded her head holding in her tears. "You can go now." She whispered. "I mean the fact that your my dad and I know nothing about you should be a good reason." She muttered.

He was going to leave her she just knew it. "It is important because it can help me. It can show me how to cope with that situation."

"Please." She whispered. "I know something happened. I can handle the truth."

Naomi looked at him. "Dad can you please me tell me. I could use all the help."

"Has something like that happened to you?" She whispered.

"I saw this shadow in the room and after that I started hearing all these voices. It felt different I couldn't control myself. One of the voices broke free and was messing with me. I went after my sister because I thought she had Dean. I thought she was the voice. Once I touched her the voice took over me."

"I want to help her. I been trying to get her to let me in." She whispered. "There's no use talking to her she will always hold what just happened over me."

"I try doing that and my sister hates me for acting like nothing ever happen." Naomi whispered.

"I don't know how to leave my past behind me." Naomi looked up at Carter. "My past always finds a way to come back."

Bobby went to his room to sleep.

"Four." She whispered softly. "I did move on dad with Dean and then he broke up my heart and everything after that went down hill." Tears slowly made their way down her face.

Bobby walked back in the house.

Naomi looked down. "He meant a lot to me I looked up to him for 18 years of my life the he said these awful things to me. He kept me from Wyatt and from coming home. No matter what I can't seem to move pass it."

"Last time it was worse." Bobby said. "Well I'm going and you should to. All of us need some rest."


"The guy who I thought was my dad." Naomi whispered.

Bobby looked at him. "So how long for the car?"

Naomi stared at the lake. "I messed up everything like usual. The night he told me I wasn't his I sort of shut down and sometimes I believe every word he says."

"Yeah from what I take she's been through a lot and 'moving on' is her way of coping." Bobby said.

Naomi didn't notice him at first.

((I was thinking of that too hmmm how about Carter?))

Bobby looked at him. "Dean I'm sorry I did that, but sometimes the most important lessons are learned when there is no other option. Naomi really likes you and I'm glad you found someone, but she's stuck in the past more than she thinks she is."

((Yeah that will make things interesting))

Naomi looked at him and nodded her head slowly. She turned around and walked slowly out. She disappeared to the lack. Sitting down softly. "I always screw up everything." She whispered. Part of her wished that her dad would come, but he probably wouldn't. Tears came down her face.

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