Ruby’s Comments (group member since Jul 26, 2014)

Ruby’s comments from the Write, Wrote, Written group.

#28.

:D

yay!

:D

This is fantastic! You're a really good writer, you know that?

:D

O.O

Nice!

KAMIKO WHY HAVE YOU STOPPED THIS START AGAIN RIGHT NOW

NOW I TELL YOU

NOW.

HAVE YOU STARTED YET?

:D Loved it!!

O.O

-G.E.O.R.G.E. the snail comes out!

#13. My Impeccable Talent For Rhymes

Oh, flower, sweet flower,
You are quite...cower....dly?
No, no let me try that again.
Oh, pencil, oh pencil,
Um, you're quite...dent? And.....ill?
Okay, let me try...
And say GOOD BYE!
Oh wow that was a fantastic rhyme, I'm really proud of myself there...
I'll try again...
BUT I'M JUST NOT NAMED MEGAN!!!
Wow, I'm really getting the hang of this!
I just can't seem to...miss!..........a word?
Oh bother.
No - mother!
Go away!
Um, Cause........yay?
AAARRGGHH
Sigh. When in doubt -

#12. Doorknobs.

Doorknobs.




Thank you! Thank you!
+catches rose bouquet+
I feel so loved!

I am apparently growing a moldy apple juice farm in my bedroom....I should probably take the cup downstairs.....nah

XD thx

#11. ODE TO THE MOLD IN MY APPLE JUICE

Ooh, yum, apple juice..
...
I don't think I want to drink you, apple juice.
You're all SPOTTY
and DOTTY
and, well - MOLDY
Yeah. I'm sorry, I-
SPLASH!
AAAHHRRGGGHHHGROSSGROSSGROSSTHEREISAPPLEJUICEMOLDONMEEEEEE

Erm, what IS a writing Sprint?

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#23. So me.