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XD Julane, to confess, that part is my favorite, too.....I've been keeping it a secret for a long time...

XD meant 'of' not 'og'

But thanks!

Some I am, some I'm not

Actually, I didn't, I was looking up random titles in a title generator for another fantasy story I'm thinking on, and it came up with that

IN PROGRESS

Dragon of Espyr

Dragon of Agea

Oh darn - well thanks!

Dragon of Otori

Dove in the Chain

Plot Brainstorm Cloud:

Three girls, all different time periods - get transported in the present, one from the past, one from the future, and one from the present.

Why do they get transported?

A pocketwatch. Grandfather's. Present girl's. She looks in the back, finds a little piece of paper, it says to turn the hands to Xx and Xx times. That makes the two other girls get popped into _____'s life (present girl)

Where did the pocketwatch come from?

Present girl's grandfather just died. In the will she got that. At first angry at him, she not want that. She throws it and the back comes off, showing the paper.

Girls' Names:

Alexis
Pixel
Emily


THIS WHOLE POST IS MOSTLY ME BRAINSTORMING, SO THAT IS WHY IT IS INCOMPLETE.

Thanks! ^-^

Chapter Two:

XD

"But.... Kiara would never allow...I mean..." Lynx stammered, completely taken off guard. "You...but...do you really think so?" Now his hard exterior was wearing off to excitement that nearly matched Alia's.

"Well why not? I see no reason not to! I mean, just one visit! C'mon, let's go show this to them!" Alia took off, but ____ caught her by the arm, stopping her in her tracks.

"Woah, woah woah. I wouldn't right now, if I were you. Kiara isn't in the best of moods, that's why I came to you guys first...wait until suppertime - then maybe her temper will have subsided..." _____ advised, and Alia consented, though albeit with definite reluctance.

"Well, okay. I guess you're right. Well - I probably have homework to do...somewhere...see you around, _______! Thanks again!" And with that, Alia skipped from the room, her orange curls flying after her.

Lynx shook his head. "I'll be surprised if she can even wait that long. Well, anyway, you wanna help me sort these?" Lynx brightened up, indicating the heap of scattered books on the floor.

"Oh, uh, well I really gotta be going - tell me how it goes, good luck!" And with that he was gone.

Lynx shrugged, then stooped down to begin sorting and re-stacking the books on the floor.

Aw shucks! Thank you!

haha, thanks

Hm...maybe somewhere in Georgia?

O.o

:D:D:D