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? Is it just so fantastically epic you're speechless? +flips hair magnificently+

https://www.goodreads.com/group/show/...


Here's a link to the group rp version of this :D

O.M.G.


That is like amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The imagery - the words - the feeling -



I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:D Yay!

YAYAYAYYAYAYAYAY

In Agea, swamps take up more space than life. The smartest inhabitants are a race of very smart, and very blue moss. The second smartest is the race of 'humans' but they aren't exactly humans as we know them. They have pointed ears, noses, and most facial features, are slightly taller than the average man, and they have a special characteristic. Ageans have the power of teleportation on their side. Since they could just teleport to any point in space whenever they wanted to, they had no use for roads and bridges. Also, great ferocious predators roam the Agean Swamps, and so all the 'humans' moved up into the trees, with no bridges connecting houses, because they would have no use. If they were to fall from their great castles of the air, they could just pop out of existance and into a safer place. They mostly ate a kind of blue moss early on in evolution, which gave them a higher brain capacity, but now their diet consists of more low-intellectually oriented plants, as they began being able to communicate with their food and it was terribly disconcerting.

In Otori, the definition of 'human' was "a creature with the highest brain capacity of all time and space, round faces and serious expressions, absolutely no kidding around, and a race more or less like Earth's human race." But the mainmost difference is that Otoris (Oh-TOR-eez) have the power of Time Manipulation. They can, at will, speed time up, slow it down, rewind it, or fast forward it. Otoris have long gotten used to the notion of being to highest intellectual race in the Universe, and all Universes beyond it, and are quite conceited and pleased with themselves, really. Their planet changes almost as much as their lives (time-wise) and the weather is never predictable, and deserts can become vast oceans in the space of a day (or however they want it to take, mind you) on this planet. They have nothing to worry about for predators, because they know their race will last eons, as they sped up time long ago to see what would happen, then rewound it just back to the part where they were in their Golden Age. Which shall last forever, if they keep this up. Which they will.

Haha, well, you shouldn't have been!

Thanks!!

(rp group)

XD thanks - I was thinking of making it into a gr group as well

Otori - Time Manipulation

Kutra - Telepathy

Agea - Teleportation

Detrye - Invisibility

Espyr - Biokinesis

There are five worlds, each circling at a steady pace their star, Qaeyr.

Agea -
Otori -
Espyr -
Detrye -
Kutra -

Telepathy - The ability to talk using only minds
Biokinesis - The ability to manipulate DNA (breathe underwater, etc etc)
Teleportation - The ability to disappear and reappear in a different point in space
Time-Manipulation - The ability to force time to slow down, speed up, rewind, or fast forward - but only within a certain radius of the user.
Camouflage/Invisibility - The ability to change into the color of your surroundings.

ANOTHER BRAINSTORM

Love the story! Keep writing!

So good!

#58.

XDXD It's like humans are glitter magnets.

like, seriously, i was just looking at myself in the mirror a few days ago, and there was one glittery speck right in the middle of my forehead, and I just kind of stood there staring at it, wondering why my life is like this.

#57.

#56.

Anyone else find random glitter on themselves?

#55.

+snort+