Ruby’s Comments (group member since Jul 26, 2014)

Ruby’s comments from the Write, Wrote, Written group.

Okay, so, maybe why don't we start on the characters, like maybe make sheets for them so we know what they are/what their personalities are, and who we want this story to be narrated by...good idea?

XD no it's okay - ya I like it!!!!

OHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

So there are 2 people who are going to be the praetorian guard?

That makes soooooooooooooooo much more sense OKAY great I get it now!

(Haven't seen or read Hunger Games, sorry >.<)

So, the losers compete in the games....why?

And the winner..is disqualified from becoming a person in the praetorian guard, or is automatically one of them?

Because if the people who cross the finish line in the race LAST get to move on to the next test.... then everybody will be going as slowly as they possibly can and the race could last for, like, forever!

Or I'm just completely missing the point...

Ɛммα Aυgυѕт wrote: "Last. The winner doesn't need to participate."

Wait, so like in golf?? Where the person with the least points wins?

Well then XD (I've never seen either of those, so)

Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh...

O's times a quazillion...

But wait, the people who come in last compete for praetorian guard or the people who are in first (in the race thing) compete for praetorian guard??

No, they're really good!

Yeah, I get exactly where you're coming from - this is just a brainstorm kind of a thing, I don't know what those are, or what answers to the questions could/will be...it's still in the process - this isn't like the final thing or anything...

Kay!

Oh...

I think it would be fun to have to do it with us! I don't know about Emmeline, Emmeline, what do you think?

Oh, well okay I just thought you were suggesting you wanted to okay nevermind then I'll take your name off

So this is what I had for an idea for the trilogy thing:

12 Names. 12 Kids. One World. One Chance.

No one wanted to do it, but it had to be done. No one stepped up, so they chose a compromise. A bucket was filled with all the names of every human under the age of sixteen and over the age of ten. They couldn’t spare anyone over that age and anyone under ten was too young to make the journey. It was decided that twelve names would be chosen and after a year of testing, six would make the actual journey to save the entire world.

From the bucket came these names:

Capricorn Byrne
Aquarius LaBerskey
Pisces ______
Aries _________
Taurus _________
Gemini ________
Cancer ________
Leo Keatts
Virgo _______
Libra Perrin
Scorpio ________
Sagittarius Cohen

What was it, fate? Was that it, that these small, hardly significant pieces of paper compared to the hundreds of others, were chosen? Was it fate that had each and every name chosen be one of the most famous constellations in the cosmos? Well, let's just wait and find out what 'fate' has in store for these names...

Well yeah, that's the gist of it, my idea was in the first 'book' the twelve kids are chosen and they are trained for a year, then in the second book the six that are chosen from the twelve make the journey to whatever place they have to go to to do whatever it is to save the world. And then in the last part they actually 'save the world'

It would be set either in a post-apocalyptic world, or another planet in another galaxy/universe.

Um, so feedback? Epictastic Idea or Epic Fail?

Nice! More!!

What do you mean?

(I've got an idea brewing and making its way on Google Docs, just so ya know XD)

Hmph.

Alright, Ruby's ready for more epictastic writing now.

+claps hands importantly+

Boy, get me my footstool, ah thank you

+puts feet up+

+crosses arms+

+waits+

Ooooooooh

But it might take a while...what if three just contribute with all three of the books/stories...or something ilke that