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Ɛммα Aυgυѕт wrote: "Kamiko wrote: "Oooh! He's blind? That;s pretty cool, since Pisces is pretty dreamy and carefree."yes, it was either that or him being paralyzed. Then I thought that paralysis might be too much, s..."
XD yeah that's really cool
XD kay, then I've got Cancer
Thanks, Monz and Valora! I really appreciate the feedback! :)
Why thank you, Monz! And yes, I did find out that the blank lines really help, because it lets my creative flow keep going even when I get stuck on that one word which is inevitable with any story I write. :)Haha, good idea XD
yay! Oh, I believe it is your turn, Emmeline to choose the last character....
yay, thanks!
Thanks!
:D:D:D:D YAY! Thanks!!
:D
"...Claire, you've got to tell the teacher, this is getting out of hand - oh, hey Amy." Sophie interrupted what seemed like one of her rants to Claire and turned to see me."Don't let me keep you from talking, finish what you were saying...oh wait, is this about -" I was cut off, however, by a very fierce glare from Sophie. I looked around, then mouthed, "WHAT" to her.
"S-A-M" Sophie mouthed, and I shut my mouth immediately. I looked around again, and spotted her. Samantha and her cronies (as we called them) we standing near her parents, laughing and talking and completely ignoring us. I didn't mind, in fact, I was glad she was ignoring us, because if she was ignoring us that meant she'd leave us alone, and that was just fine with me.
I looked back at Sophie and mouthed, "WHAT'D SHE DO THIS TIME?"
Sophie just shook her head and waved her hand as if to say, "I'll tell you later." Then she turned back to Claire and continued trying to persuade her to do...well something, but I wasn't really listening. Instead, I was staring over at Samantha again, lost in thought.
A minute or so had gone by, but when I shook myself out of my trance, I was staring at some very nice, suede boots with (probably real) fur lining that were tapping impatiently in my face. My eyes traveled up and I bit my lip. It was Samantha. How I hadn't noticed her coming over here in her bright lavender dress (yes, she was wearing a dress, unlike the rest of the fourth grade, and yes she was wearing boots usually kept for the winter with it. She had an odd taste.) was beyond me. But at the moment her face was twisted into a forced smile, and her hands were on her hips.
"Hellooo Amy...might I ask one teensy-weensy question?" She was smiling even wider now, and I could see perfect white teeth in her smile, the T.V. commercial image broken only by that one tooth that never seemed to be able to get as white as the rest.
I scrambled to my feet, a tad ungracefully - okay, a lot ungracefully, and noticed a hush had fallen over the rest of the fourth grade girls.
"Yeah?" I said, standing level with her. We were the exact same height, but at that moment I wished I was at least one tiny inch taller, then maybe I'd feel __________. But alas, unless the spinich on my plate had some magic pixie dust in it, I was to stay ___ ft __ for the moment.
"Why were you staring at me, Amy?" She said sweetly, her voice high and musical. She did that whenever she knew she was in charge. She'd make her voice go a little higher and sound like she was in the Sound of Music, but try as I might, I could never talk like that without doubling over coughing after a few minutes. It was hard to do. But back to the question at hand.
"What do you mean, Samantha?" I asked cooly, putting my own hands on my hips as well. None of the other girls stood up to help me, not even Sophie. I was always the one to stand up to Sam, even if it wasn't all that effective. So, I wasn't all that surprised when no one came to my rescue. Someone did gasp, however. Oh yeah, did I mention that? Sam now hates being called by her full name, and insists everyone calls her Sam - which everyone does...except me, and I definitely like to rub it in her face.
She narrowed her eyes. "You were staring at me, Amy (that also annoyed her a great deal, since my name was so simple to begin with, there was no possible way to make it longer to try and annoy me...except maybe Amiable, but that wasn't even a name.), why were you staring at me?" Truth be told, I hadn't meant to be staring at her for so long, I just got lost in thought...which happened a lot.
"Oh, I don't know, maybe I was just staring at the...spinach in your teeth, you know." I gestured to my own teeth, hoping to great God I'd gotten it all out of my own.
Sam shrieked and put her hands to her mouth, shot one last glare in my direction, and fled up to the school bathrooms to check, Charlotte and Lucy in tow.
I've finished with my three character profiles so far, wanna see them, Kam?
I believe it's Emmeline's turn to choose, so I'll wait for her.
Awesome! So for me and Emmeline to choose from are:Cancer
Virgo
It's okay! We picked:Capricorn
Leo
Gemini
Sagittarius
Aries
Pisces
and the ones left are:
Aquarius
Taurus
Cancer
Virgo
Libra
Scorpio
No, it's okay! Just, er, wait did you pick four and which ones so me and Emmeline can get our last two...
"Um...yeah same here..." I cleared my throat and tried desperately to think of something else to talk about, but my mind was blank. Finally it was Avery who said, "Have any plans for this summer?"Extremely relieved, I answered, "Well, my mom's signed me up for a few camps - Girl Scout Camp, Theater camp, you know...what about you? Are you going to any camps this summer?"
"No..." Avery said, swallowed hard, then continued. "I'm going to my aunt and uncle's, though, for most of the summer..."
Probably so her parents can sort things out without their kids getting in the way... But aloud I said, "Cool...I hear they live on a farm - that'll be fun, right?"
Avery gave a small, noncommittal grunt-sound, and began pushing her food around again. It didn't seem like she wanted to talk anymore, so I casually turned away, then scooted closer to Claire and Sophie and the few other girls.
AquariusTaurus
Cancer
Virgo
Libra
Scorpio
Okay, so Kamiko you can pick four from these that are left (imaginary arrow pointing up)
(Also, I've finished my three character sheets!)
Ermm Kamiko? We're kinda waiting for you to pick your four characters...
