First Impact: BEHIND THOSE EYES by Chris Warrick

It's been a while since we've done a First Impact Critique (it's been a while since I've gotten one!). To refresh your memory, First Impact is
where we take a look at your queries, first pages, back cover copy, and
more. You want to make an impact right from the start. We're here to
help you do that.



I'll offer my critique below, then if you're nice (and you are, right? Otherwise what are you doing hanging around here?), you'll offer your own thoughts as well.



If you'd like to submit your f...