First Impact: THE ANKULEN by Kendra E. Ardnek

It's been a while, but we have another First Impact Critique,
where we take a look at your queries, first pages, back cover copy, and
more. You want to make an impact right from the start. We're here to
help you do that.



If you'd like to submit your first impact material, send it to firstimpactAE@gmail.com. Details here.








This week we have the back cover copy for a fantasy by Kendra Ardnek (I see what you did there) called THE ANKULEN. My overall thoughts are at the end. As always,...