First Impact: JUMPING ANTS by Lori Goldstein

It's time for another First Impact Critique,
where I take a look at your queries, first pages, back cover copy, etc.
You want to make an impact right from the start. We're here to help
you do that.



If you'd like to submit your first impact material, send it to firstimpactAE@gmail.com. Details here.



Remember, anyone who offers their comments is eligible for either $10 for Amazon or B&N OR a 20-page critique from me.








Here, in Lori's own words: I'm submitting two takes on a pitch that...