First Impact: A QUESTION OF FAITH (first page)

It's time for another First Impact Critique,
where I take a look at your queries, first pages, back cover copy, etc.
You want to make an impact right from the start. We're here to help
you do that.



If you'd like to submit your first impact material, send it to firstimpactAE@gmail.com. Details here.



Remember, anyone who offers their comments is eligible for either $10 for Amazon or B&N OR a 20-page critique from me.





Last week, we had a YA paranormal query from Nicole Zoltack. This wee...