First Impact: MIST OF KAVALA by Carolyn Abiad

It's time for another First Impact Critique,
where I take a look at your queries, first pages, back cover copy, etc.
You want to make an impact right from the start, and we're here to help
you do that.



If you'd like to submit your first impact material, send it to firstimpactAE@gmail.com. Details here.



Remember, anyone who leaves a critique in the comments is eligible to win a 15-page critique from INCARNATE author, Jodi Meadows. Your critique doesn't have to be long, just useful.






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