Logline Revision Critiques #20

TITLE: Twenty-Four Hour Boy
GENRE: Contemporary Middle Grade

Original critique on MSFV






Up all night, every night, ten-year old gadget-maker Hunter
Harris is happy with his freakish lifestyle. Unfortunately, when Hunter reports
a strange light and noises in the night and then a murder next door his parents
question his sanity and Hunter has to prove that he was telling the truth or
risk losing his secret life forever.