Logline Revision Critiques #23

TITLE: Artashad

GENRE: Historical

Original critique on MSFV



When
exiled Prince Tiridates hears how his people suffer under Persian
occupation, he convinces the Romans to send a liberating force to
Armenia. The Roman warlords have their own motives, and the Persians
will violently defend their claim, but if Tiridates must achieve the
throne or his nation will cease to exist.