Logline Revision Critiques #26

TITLE: My Sister's Dating a Serial Killer

GENRE: YA Thriller

Original critique on MSFV



High school's a bummer for sixteen-year-old Cameo "Cammie" Carter who
must stop her eighteen-year-old sister from dating a serial killer. The only way is to get hard evidence on him, but if Cammie doesn't
hurry, the killer might just put her and her sister on his To Do Murder List.