A Common Query Problem (also Kung Fu Panda)

Disclaimer: The only query slush I read is on the internet, but there's a lot out here, and I read most of it. So don't knock it.



THE PROBLEM

Every query letter is different, but I've seen a lot lately with the same problems. It looks kinda like this:



Paragraph 1: Hook.

Paragraph 2: Innocent World.

Paragraph 3: Inciting Incident (often repeating the Hook).

All his life, Po wishes he could be a kung fu master, but he gets more than he bargained for when he's mistakenly named the legendary D...