The Grave Robber's Despair

My book The Last Breath World Of Souls: The Grave Robber's Despair begins at chapter 1. King Chutney's Tomb. there is a reference before the chapters concerning the terms character's etc. and then there is a prologue. Desiderio in his journal Tells of his relationship with Parson Kelter a preserver of King Gustoler's Last Breath. Desiderio is a consummate thief, a seeker of the Last Breath and he seeks it, with Alana, a love interest. though his love gets in his way to judge the dragons they face and his love is stronger than the dragon's visceral hate. and all Hell comes down on them.....