Intrepid Fantasy

the best way I can summarize my book The Last Breath World of Souls is...In Lord Of The Rings you had the ring, in Star Wars you had the Force, in this novel you have the Last Breath, where the Breath can be an imposter as well as a saving element within a witch's heart. Desiderio desperately seeks redemption for himself against the nefarious sister snake dragons Critia, and Sarehole at two different points of his journals. Wonderful fantasy element in story from the mind of the character through his writings, I was hoping to convey the the magic to come across as organic and from sources like plants and air and within the body of the magic user...