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Meanwhile, the iBooks version remains lost in space. I have hopes that uploading the new file will automagically correct that somehow, but that's based on less than zero actual knowledge. I'll continue to keep an eye out.
Ta, L.

The later one has Ron Miller's art credit in the front matter, for the quickest way to tell.
The corrected one seems to be up OK at Nook and Kindle now.
Ta, L.

I'm amused Pen still has problems because he's too pretty and too youthful looking.

I'm amused Pen still has problems because he'..."
Excellent!
L.

I really enjoyed this one - so much so that I read it twice, back-to-back, which is unusual for me. Read it again, sure, but no so quickly. I didn't do that with The Orphans Of Raspay - that one didn't grab me so much and I can't explain why.
So, anyway, this one. It would have been nice to see more of Nikys, but this story didn't call for it. If it had, she'd likely have been in some sort of danger, so probably just as well. Penric is a dad! Having just become a grandfather (and doesn't saying *that* make me feel old) for the first time a week ago, I can sympathise, at a remove - though it does bring back a lot of memories.
Was the horsefly sent by the Bastard? That was left ambiguous, which is just like Him, of course.
I have to say that the coincidental case of art mirroring life in the subject matter didn't affect me; if anything, it made it more relevant and relatable. Having said that, I haven't lost anyone to Covid-19, so others may feel differently.
In short, very enjoyable, and as always, I look forward to any more that Ms Bujold may care to write.

Penric certainly seemed to think it was. If it was just a random horsefly, it was rather out of place in the temple, and bit him with suspiciously good timing. But the god didn't feel the need to sign his name to the event.

Des seemed to think so too. The five gods certainly make for valid deus ex horsefly.

No update for the Kindle version from Amazon UK yet. It'll get here eventually, I'm sure.

Thought I'd pass along one proofreading method that really does work: It takes two people, but could be done over the phone. One reads the work aloud, including all punctuation and font styles. The other compares it to the printed or electronic version. So, for example, where I'm reading now would be read aloud as: Pen danced up to him comma grabbed him by the hands comma and spun him around period Open quote And time well dash spent it was exclamation point Rede comma, I've italics cracked end italics this nut exclamation point close quote.
The benefit of this method is that it's really hard to get caught up in the story and forces the reader to pay strict attention to the text.

It's a fictional amalgam of historical diseases, run through a general understanding of how diseases work (and past a physician test-reader for a plausibility check.) There are elements of bubonic, sleeping sickness (tsetse flies are ugly critters), yellow fever (Rede is named after Walter), West Nile (which was taking out horses in Minnesota a few years back), and so on, but it's not tightly based on any one. It is, obviously, blood-borne like malaria, yellow fever, Lyme, Rocky Mountain Spotted, or sleeping sickness, which also have insect vectors; not contact or droplets. High lethality, but low transmission rate and a narrow transmission channel, luckily for my protagonists.
Ta, L.

Two more have been found since then, sigh. I'm not going to tell you where.
And in rereading the opening of my original Kindle version of"Penric's Mission" for the upcoming Baen online reading, I found another one. It seems to have been corrected in all the subsequent editions, though.
The typo fairy is an evil little bugger.
Ta, L.



I deleted files, re-downloaded (I'm using Kindle on PC) and the typos are still there. Evil magic.

I believe Nook updates automagically - which platform are you using?
L.
On the subject of PR work and writing reviews: we all see here what happens when I start writing anything. Somehow it turns out in people's eyes I am a very radical, very annoying, very self-centered and aggressive character, so not sure if having me writing a review anywhere would be a good thing. Also, I am not a member of any reading circle/mailing list/literary forum and thus cannot reach hidden audiences. I have a shelf at home though, dedicated to Bujold works, which is available for anyone who has entered the house. (Because of this practice, the shelf is very much thinned out, since people forget to return books they've liked. I only hope at some point they will pass the favour/book copy to the next unsuspecting individual).