November 7, 2017

Tuesday, November 7th - No rain, no rain, no rain, gorgeous weather, cool, warm, cool -- we have family coming in noonish today and guess what? Tomorrow and Thursday it's going to be cold and lots of RAIN -- I must have done something really bad and the regional weather minion supervisor has put me on their punishment list -- well, and my company too.
WEEK #9: 4-0 -- my very first perfect score this year. Lots of you were right with me at 4-0. We're great -- To Date: 22-14. How about you guys?
The Clean Writing workshop: focuses on not piling up adjectives and adverbs in sex scenes, primarily. Like, "He ravaged her rosy soft breast" Big yuck -- where to start? How about toss? As for writers who love description, well, that's their style but I agree -- anything that stops the reader from moving smartly forward is not good. So, where's the editor?
Good point made about toes: When you scoot your butt against the wall today (5 minutes of snooze time -- for you, quiet, deep breathing, you get the idea) lie there and relax and empty your mind, then beginning with your TOES -- wiggle them, stretch them, then work slowly up, pointing/flexing feet, again, you know what to do. This is before CARDIO -- who's doing a lot of walking? Remember shoulder blades together, feet straight, work arms -- You're golden -