Jack Lewis Baillot's Blog, page 43
June 3, 2014
"I'll catch the thief or die in the attempt." "Can't you do both?"
Wherein a defense is made.
Jack is busy writing. And crying. It is kind of funny, watching her curled up in her chair, crying her eyes out over scenes she is writing. I have spent a lot of time laughing-
HOLD IT!!!!! You can't say that!!!! It defeats the purpose of us being here!
Oh yes, right. Sorry, I got a little - carried away.
Let me handle this, I can fix it. Hello! My name is Golon. I am one of the Dwarf brothers in Jack's Loyalty series. She probably hasn't mentioned me yet, poor thing, so much to do and so little time.
Oh, yóu're good!
I know, shut up and let me finish. Jack has been very busy today with her writing and reading, so I and Captain Shamus Steed, have decided to help her out with her.....blogging.
Stupid word
I said shut up! *Ahem* Anyways......like I said, Jack probably hasn't talked about me much, and if she has she has probably referred to me as one of the "rebellious" characters who likes to change the plot on her.
Which is something we want to clear up. You see, Jack is so sleep deprived and over worked, the poor girl is easily confused.
Easily. We don't hold this against her. She is trying her best, poor thing. You should see her some nights, working when her eyes won't stay opened....
Are we over doing it?"
I said shut up! Just go with this!
Right. Over worked. Unable to keep her eyes opened. Going with it. This has been hard on Jack. I don't think she realized what she was getting into until it was too late. Now, she is buried in work and unable to function like a normal human being.
*Snort*
What was that about shutting up?!
Sorry. Just, normal and Jack in the same sentence, that is funny.
*Shakes head.* As we were saying, Jack has been suffering lack of sleep and major confusion. And she often mixes certain of us characters up with the villains.
You've probably heard her. Talking about how misbehaving her characters are, changing the plot on her. Poking her while she is trying to sleep. Demanding we she write our books. Following her around and annoying her....
But the truth is, our dear, worn out Jack is getting us confused. We, all of us hero characters - we do our best to help Jack. We love her. We always do what she says. It is the villains who make her life miserable and change the plot. But darling Jack, she keeps forgetting it is them.
Darling might be over doing it.
I'm French. I am known for using terms of endearment.
I don't know what French is, but your mustache looks stupid. Is that part of being French? Why not grow a full beard?
It would take away from my dashing good looks. But we are not talking about me. We are talking about exhausted Jack....
Speaking of which, she is coming!!!!!!!!!!
What?! RUN!!!!!
Hit the publish button first!!!!!!!!!!!! HURRY!!!! She is coming in the door.....................................
Jack is busy writing. And crying. It is kind of funny, watching her curled up in her chair, crying her eyes out over scenes she is writing. I have spent a lot of time laughing-
HOLD IT!!!!! You can't say that!!!! It defeats the purpose of us being here!
Oh yes, right. Sorry, I got a little - carried away.
Let me handle this, I can fix it. Hello! My name is Golon. I am one of the Dwarf brothers in Jack's Loyalty series. She probably hasn't mentioned me yet, poor thing, so much to do and so little time.
Oh, yóu're good!
I know, shut up and let me finish. Jack has been very busy today with her writing and reading, so I and Captain Shamus Steed, have decided to help her out with her.....blogging.
Stupid word
I said shut up! *Ahem* Anyways......like I said, Jack probably hasn't talked about me much, and if she has she has probably referred to me as one of the "rebellious" characters who likes to change the plot on her.
Which is something we want to clear up. You see, Jack is so sleep deprived and over worked, the poor girl is easily confused.
Easily. We don't hold this against her. She is trying her best, poor thing. You should see her some nights, working when her eyes won't stay opened....
Are we over doing it?"
I said shut up! Just go with this!
Right. Over worked. Unable to keep her eyes opened. Going with it. This has been hard on Jack. I don't think she realized what she was getting into until it was too late. Now, she is buried in work and unable to function like a normal human being.
*Snort*
What was that about shutting up?!
Sorry. Just, normal and Jack in the same sentence, that is funny.
*Shakes head.* As we were saying, Jack has been suffering lack of sleep and major confusion. And she often mixes certain of us characters up with the villains.
You've probably heard her. Talking about how misbehaving her characters are, changing the plot on her. Poking her while she is trying to sleep. Demanding we she write our books. Following her around and annoying her....
But the truth is, our dear, worn out Jack is getting us confused. We, all of us hero characters - we do our best to help Jack. We love her. We always do what she says. It is the villains who make her life miserable and change the plot. But darling Jack, she keeps forgetting it is them.
Darling might be over doing it.
I'm French. I am known for using terms of endearment.
I don't know what French is, but your mustache looks stupid. Is that part of being French? Why not grow a full beard?
It would take away from my dashing good looks. But we are not talking about me. We are talking about exhausted Jack....
Speaking of which, she is coming!!!!!!!!!!
What?! RUN!!!!!
Hit the publish button first!!!!!!!!!!!! HURRY!!!! She is coming in the door.....................................
June 2, 2014
"There was a pastry mishap."
Wherein Jack has an announcement.
I may have gotten my dates wrong, but I believe today is the release of Champion in Flight, a wonderful new book by Tyrean Martinson. (I did a cover reveal for this book a couple weeks back)
Today she is doing a Flight - I forgot the name. It has a name, a good name, but I don't remember it. It is like a blog party, only everyone joining in gets to talk about their favourite way to fly. (Fun, right?!) I also have a book review, since Champion in Flight was one of the books I was asked to read and review.
But first....
Jack's Favourite Way To Fly This isn't as easy as you think it should be. I have flown in about every way imaginable. Dragon, Griffin, airplane, hang glider. Air Balloon. Jumping off a speeding train and having someone catch me... But, if I had to pick my top favourite of all time, it would be airship. And not just any airship, but the airship flown by Captain Shamus Steed and his mad-cap Air Pirates. Flying with them is hazardous to my health, but it is still a lot of fun.
What about all of you? How do you like to fly?
Now, as I said, I have a book review!
I enjoyed the first book and was therefore hopeful the second would be just as good.
This is not one of those intense Fantasy stories. Not like Lord of the Rings. It is more on the level with Narnia. Fun, a little lighter, but with deep, hidden messages.
It is a year after a battle that Clara fought in and had her sword broken. She is now determined to fix it, as it was given to her by the Lord to help her serve the people. There is only one problem, Clara is angry and wants revenge over the death of her friends and parents. She sets out on her quest, knowing she has to deal with the anger in her heart before she can be the Champion she has been called to be.
There is also a new character, a cursed prince named Laim. (Like Laim. Laim is cool.) Laim is on his own quest, but when his path crosses Clara's....well, well they weren't together enough for my liking. I am hoping they get to spend more time together in book three because they seem like they will be a lot of fun if they have to work together.
I really don't know what to say about this book. It is so familiar while being so unique. It is really just a lot of fun to read.
After I finished it I wanted to go back and read book one again because I had forgotten how much I missed spending time with Clara.
Then there was the ending. The wonderful ending which left me looking just like this.
Cliff hangers, my friends. Cliff hangers.
Anyways. You can find Tyrean's blog HERE!!
Links and Blurb and other fun things!
Champion in Flight Blurb
A year after she won the battle for Septily, Clara feels trapped in Skycliff by the Allied Council. As the last pieces of information about the Healing Caves fall into place, Clara is attacked by an assassin. Covert Drinaii mercenaries and the Council aren’t going to stop Clara from her quest to heal her broken blade. As Champion of Aramatir, she must act.Meanwhile, in the joint kingdoms of Rrysorria and Wylandria, the youngest and still cursed swan prince despairs of ever being whole again. In a moment of anger and desperation, Liam discovers a blood link between him and a dark sorceress.
Clara won the battle for Septily, but her battle isn’t over.
Champion in Flight is the second book in The Champion Trilogy.
Author Bio: Tyrean Martinson lives and writes in the Pacific Northwest, with her encouraging family. She likes to write, read, teach, ski, bicycle, and walk.Tyrean has been published in Overcoming Adversity, The Best of Every Day Poets and Sunday Snaps: The Stories. Dragonfold and Other Adventures, and Light Reflections showcase Tyrean’s stories and poetry. She is currently hard at work on the third novel in The Champion Trilogy: Champion’s Destiny.
Author Links:Blog: http://tyreanswritingspot.blogspot.com/Facebook https://www.facebook.com/TyreanMartinsonTwitter https://twitter.com/TyreanMartinsonSmashwords https://www.smashwords.com/profile/view/TyreanAmazon Author Page http://www.amazon.com/Tyrean-Martinson/e/B00BCKPHZK/ref=sr_ntt_srch_lnk_1?qid=1401319332&sr=8-1-fkmr0
Cool Reviews for Champion in the Darkness, used with permission by the reviewers:
“So often I've read ‘Christian” books which have the same theme. ‘God is love and everything will work out for you.’ Yes, God is love, but He is SO much more than that. And Tyrean showed so many more of His attributes. A judge, a shepherd, and a warrior. I was really surprised and impressed, and I came to love the story all the more because of it.”- Jack Lewis Baillot, author of A Stretch of Loyalty, Haphazardly Implausible, and Abolished Impracticality.
“I loved the way the author connected you to the characters and made them seem like real people.” – Rylee, Teen Reviewer“while the religious side was evident, it never overwhelmed the story. I appreciated how Martinson not only showed people displaying faith when times were easy, but how she explored loss of faith when times were hard, and how different people coped with doubt, anger, and fear.” – Nickie Anderson, author of Bright Star Allons-y!
I may have gotten my dates wrong, but I believe today is the release of Champion in Flight, a wonderful new book by Tyrean Martinson. (I did a cover reveal for this book a couple weeks back)
Today she is doing a Flight - I forgot the name. It has a name, a good name, but I don't remember it. It is like a blog party, only everyone joining in gets to talk about their favourite way to fly. (Fun, right?!) I also have a book review, since Champion in Flight was one of the books I was asked to read and review.
But first....
Jack's Favourite Way To Fly This isn't as easy as you think it should be. I have flown in about every way imaginable. Dragon, Griffin, airplane, hang glider. Air Balloon. Jumping off a speeding train and having someone catch me... But, if I had to pick my top favourite of all time, it would be airship. And not just any airship, but the airship flown by Captain Shamus Steed and his mad-cap Air Pirates. Flying with them is hazardous to my health, but it is still a lot of fun.
What about all of you? How do you like to fly?
Now, as I said, I have a book review!
I enjoyed the first book and was therefore hopeful the second would be just as good.
This is not one of those intense Fantasy stories. Not like Lord of the Rings. It is more on the level with Narnia. Fun, a little lighter, but with deep, hidden messages.
It is a year after a battle that Clara fought in and had her sword broken. She is now determined to fix it, as it was given to her by the Lord to help her serve the people. There is only one problem, Clara is angry and wants revenge over the death of her friends and parents. She sets out on her quest, knowing she has to deal with the anger in her heart before she can be the Champion she has been called to be.
There is also a new character, a cursed prince named Laim. (Like Laim. Laim is cool.) Laim is on his own quest, but when his path crosses Clara's....well, well they weren't together enough for my liking. I am hoping they get to spend more time together in book three because they seem like they will be a lot of fun if they have to work together.
I really don't know what to say about this book. It is so familiar while being so unique. It is really just a lot of fun to read.
After I finished it I wanted to go back and read book one again because I had forgotten how much I missed spending time with Clara.
Then there was the ending. The wonderful ending which left me looking just like this.
Cliff hangers, my friends. Cliff hangers.
Anyways. You can find Tyrean's blog HERE!!
Links and Blurb and other fun things!
Champion in Flight Blurb
A year after she won the battle for Septily, Clara feels trapped in Skycliff by the Allied Council. As the last pieces of information about the Healing Caves fall into place, Clara is attacked by an assassin. Covert Drinaii mercenaries and the Council aren’t going to stop Clara from her quest to heal her broken blade. As Champion of Aramatir, she must act.Meanwhile, in the joint kingdoms of Rrysorria and Wylandria, the youngest and still cursed swan prince despairs of ever being whole again. In a moment of anger and desperation, Liam discovers a blood link between him and a dark sorceress.
Clara won the battle for Septily, but her battle isn’t over.
Champion in Flight is the second book in The Champion Trilogy.
Author Bio: Tyrean Martinson lives and writes in the Pacific Northwest, with her encouraging family. She likes to write, read, teach, ski, bicycle, and walk.Tyrean has been published in Overcoming Adversity, The Best of Every Day Poets and Sunday Snaps: The Stories. Dragonfold and Other Adventures, and Light Reflections showcase Tyrean’s stories and poetry. She is currently hard at work on the third novel in The Champion Trilogy: Champion’s Destiny.
Author Links:Blog: http://tyreanswritingspot.blogspot.com/Facebook https://www.facebook.com/TyreanMartinsonTwitter https://twitter.com/TyreanMartinsonSmashwords https://www.smashwords.com/profile/view/TyreanAmazon Author Page http://www.amazon.com/Tyrean-Martinson/e/B00BCKPHZK/ref=sr_ntt_srch_lnk_1?qid=1401319332&sr=8-1-fkmr0
Cool Reviews for Champion in the Darkness, used with permission by the reviewers:
“So often I've read ‘Christian” books which have the same theme. ‘God is love and everything will work out for you.’ Yes, God is love, but He is SO much more than that. And Tyrean showed so many more of His attributes. A judge, a shepherd, and a warrior. I was really surprised and impressed, and I came to love the story all the more because of it.”- Jack Lewis Baillot, author of A Stretch of Loyalty, Haphazardly Implausible, and Abolished Impracticality.
“I loved the way the author connected you to the characters and made them seem like real people.” – Rylee, Teen Reviewer“while the religious side was evident, it never overwhelmed the story. I appreciated how Martinson not only showed people displaying faith when times were easy, but how she explored loss of faith when times were hard, and how different people coped with doubt, anger, and fear.” – Nickie Anderson, author of Bright Star Allons-y!
June 1, 2014
"Shouldn't there be a parade or something?" "Not in Germany."
So this is happening.
(Well, let met get to the this. First some back story about the this.)
I don't write Historical Fiction. (I know, you didn't know that, did you? All those Historical Fiction books I've been talking about.) I don't really read it much either. One, because there is usually an overload of historical detail. I like detail, but I don't really care about a ton of description when I am trying to enjoy a story. Another reason I don't read it a lot is because most of Historical Fiction is romance, and the plots don't differ all that much. I read most of a series once, and by the time I got to the last book I gave up. I had guessed the plot before I even read the blurb.
That isn't the reason I don't write Historical Fiction. I am a History Nerd. I love history. A lot. When I first started writing all I wrote were Historical books, but I never finished much of them. I spent too researching so everything would be perfect. And then I got sidetracked researching and forgot what I was writing. I decided to stick with creating my own worlds and histories.
Okay...now..... During May I was doing a Camp NaNo with my friend Ben. I spent most of it editing and working on getting some re-writings done on the third Haphazard book. It really helped me a lot, because I had scenes in the third book I didn't want to write. Ben had scenes in her book she didn't want to write. We poked each other and cried together, which is so much nicer than poking yourself and crying alone.
Now it is June, which was supposed to be the official Camp NaNo, but it got moved to July, but another friend of mine and I had plans to do Camp NaNo in June. We have decided to have our own, because we have ideas and don't want to wait.
And other things happened.
I'd like to say the things involved a story I've been thinking about for the past year or two. I'd like to say I needed the added motivation to get the third Haphazard book written, or the third Loyalty book. Maybe even get some more work done on the Blade books. But.....that is hardly ever how my mind works. No, the things that happened were another friend of mine challenging me with the words, "I bet I can get to 50,000 before you this year."
Hm......
Did I mention I am very competitive? Someone once bet I couldn't write 200,000 words during NaNo. So what did I do? I wrote 200,000 words. (For the record, don't try it. It really hurts one's brain afterward.)
Anyways, I couldn't pass up this challenge. Especially because I already bet said friend I could make her cry over Bucky Barnes before she could get me to cry over him. And I've not been doing so great with that, so this was like a consolation challenge. "You won't cry over my heart breaking Bucky stories?! FINE! I will get more words than you!"
Now, to sum up what my writing life is going to be like during the next month.
I will be doing a TON of reading. (Don't worry, I know that isn't writing. But it is part of my writing work, so there.) I am currently reading six books. Be envious, because they are all REALLY good. Only, since I am reading them to do early reviews I get to read them early and you have to wait. (Sorry. Evil Overlord, remember? I have to take these gloating moments, it is part of my contract.)
I will continue working on the third Haphazard book as well as finishing editing A Test of Loyalty. Never fear, I don't have any intention of getting behind on those and moving back publication dates just so I can out write my friend.
The other day I finished the second Blade book and have started the third. I plan on continuing work on these because right now I know where the plot is going and I know if I stop all together for a month I will lose that and then I will have to take all the boys out to dinner just so they will cooperate again. (There are seven of them. And they aren't grown boys. I would be washing dishes for the rest of my life to pay for that dinner.)
Blogging still? Yes. Sane posts that make sense? Eh, not likely. Really, don't push your luck. My talent only extends so far.
But there, writing life will go on. And June will be fun and exciting and insane and I am looking forward to it. I love a good challenge.
Now, to the part where I tell you what I will be writing about.
I don't normally do this. If I plan on publishing I like to keep things kind of secret so when I get closer to publishing it will be more of a surprise. I do plan to publish this book someday, but I don't think it will do any harm talking about it early. I think it is going to turn into one of my longer projects, like the Blade books.
I have had this idea going around in my head - like I said - for about two years now. I started studying more about WWII, a subject I was never interested in in school. (I blame movies like The Great Escape and The Monument's Men for this, among other, for my new-found interest in WWII.)
In short, I decided I wanted to write a WWII story. I sort of did, I mean....the idea of Historical Fiction still scares me. The idea of writing a WWII story scares me even more. The whole WWII time period has always made me sad, and so far I have only written 5000 words and have cried twice. But the idea hasn't gone away, and the friend I am writing with loves history as much as I do. So with her at my side, I have decided to go through with this.
I don't really have a good blurb. But this is just the, test one.
Franz and Japhet have been best friends since they were eight and seven. It has never bothered either of them that Japhet is a Jew, but things are changing in Germany and as rumors of war grow, Franz is constantly being told he shouldn't be friends with a Jew, let alone best friends. The time is coming when Franz is going to have to make a choice and the two friends are going to have to decide how much they value their friendship.
I am a bit scared, attempting this. I have the ideas of where I want to go with it, but getting through it is not going to be easy. But I am hoping I can finish, because I do like the plot.
The title I am pretty sure I am going to stick with is Brothers-in-Arms.
What do you all think?
And that said, I think I will take a moment to peer through the internet and inquire of my NaNo buddy. (You know who you are, you dear Bucky of mine you.) (And no, I don't use fake names for my friends because their identity needs to be kept secret. I just like nicknames - if you hadn't noticed, since I go by Jack - and I like to use them even when there is no point.)
Anyways, 5000. 5000. What is your count you NaNo buddy of mine you?
One more thing though, because I am a bit pleased with this. I have a snippet.....I know, right? Title and snippet all in one day! (Don't get used to it, it isn't going to be a habit.)
1944“I've doubted your loyalty since the day I met you.” The sneer showed every bit of hate in Stein's heart as he scowled at Franz. Hate he had never been good at keeping hidden.“Just shot me and get it over with,” Japhet whispered, his voice cracking as he tried to keep his feet under him. “You've taken everything else from me, why not my life?”“You have no authority to shot him!” Franz exclaimed, interrupting and glaring at both Japhet and Stein. “You weren't given the orders to do so!”“He is a Jew, I don't need orders!” Stein spat. “You think anyone is going to quibble over the life of one Jew? And besides, who said anything about me shooting him?”He turned his head and gave Franz a look as cold as ice, before motioning to the pistol holstered at Franz's side.
“Like I said before. I've had questions about which side your loyalty really lies on. I want these questions put to rest. Which will it be? Kill your childhood friend, or join him?”
Quote is from The Monument's Men, after the war is one and the men are leaving Germany.
Allons-y!
(Well, let met get to the this. First some back story about the this.)
I don't write Historical Fiction. (I know, you didn't know that, did you? All those Historical Fiction books I've been talking about.) I don't really read it much either. One, because there is usually an overload of historical detail. I like detail, but I don't really care about a ton of description when I am trying to enjoy a story. Another reason I don't read it a lot is because most of Historical Fiction is romance, and the plots don't differ all that much. I read most of a series once, and by the time I got to the last book I gave up. I had guessed the plot before I even read the blurb.
That isn't the reason I don't write Historical Fiction. I am a History Nerd. I love history. A lot. When I first started writing all I wrote were Historical books, but I never finished much of them. I spent too researching so everything would be perfect. And then I got sidetracked researching and forgot what I was writing. I decided to stick with creating my own worlds and histories.
Okay...now..... During May I was doing a Camp NaNo with my friend Ben. I spent most of it editing and working on getting some re-writings done on the third Haphazard book. It really helped me a lot, because I had scenes in the third book I didn't want to write. Ben had scenes in her book she didn't want to write. We poked each other and cried together, which is so much nicer than poking yourself and crying alone.
Now it is June, which was supposed to be the official Camp NaNo, but it got moved to July, but another friend of mine and I had plans to do Camp NaNo in June. We have decided to have our own, because we have ideas and don't want to wait.
And other things happened.
I'd like to say the things involved a story I've been thinking about for the past year or two. I'd like to say I needed the added motivation to get the third Haphazard book written, or the third Loyalty book. Maybe even get some more work done on the Blade books. But.....that is hardly ever how my mind works. No, the things that happened were another friend of mine challenging me with the words, "I bet I can get to 50,000 before you this year."
Hm......
Did I mention I am very competitive? Someone once bet I couldn't write 200,000 words during NaNo. So what did I do? I wrote 200,000 words. (For the record, don't try it. It really hurts one's brain afterward.)
Anyways, I couldn't pass up this challenge. Especially because I already bet said friend I could make her cry over Bucky Barnes before she could get me to cry over him. And I've not been doing so great with that, so this was like a consolation challenge. "You won't cry over my heart breaking Bucky stories?! FINE! I will get more words than you!"
Now, to sum up what my writing life is going to be like during the next month.
I will be doing a TON of reading. (Don't worry, I know that isn't writing. But it is part of my writing work, so there.) I am currently reading six books. Be envious, because they are all REALLY good. Only, since I am reading them to do early reviews I get to read them early and you have to wait. (Sorry. Evil Overlord, remember? I have to take these gloating moments, it is part of my contract.)
I will continue working on the third Haphazard book as well as finishing editing A Test of Loyalty. Never fear, I don't have any intention of getting behind on those and moving back publication dates just so I can out write my friend.
The other day I finished the second Blade book and have started the third. I plan on continuing work on these because right now I know where the plot is going and I know if I stop all together for a month I will lose that and then I will have to take all the boys out to dinner just so they will cooperate again. (There are seven of them. And they aren't grown boys. I would be washing dishes for the rest of my life to pay for that dinner.)
Blogging still? Yes. Sane posts that make sense? Eh, not likely. Really, don't push your luck. My talent only extends so far.
But there, writing life will go on. And June will be fun and exciting and insane and I am looking forward to it. I love a good challenge.
Now, to the part where I tell you what I will be writing about.
I don't normally do this. If I plan on publishing I like to keep things kind of secret so when I get closer to publishing it will be more of a surprise. I do plan to publish this book someday, but I don't think it will do any harm talking about it early. I think it is going to turn into one of my longer projects, like the Blade books.
I have had this idea going around in my head - like I said - for about two years now. I started studying more about WWII, a subject I was never interested in in school. (I blame movies like The Great Escape and The Monument's Men for this, among other, for my new-found interest in WWII.)
In short, I decided I wanted to write a WWII story. I sort of did, I mean....the idea of Historical Fiction still scares me. The idea of writing a WWII story scares me even more. The whole WWII time period has always made me sad, and so far I have only written 5000 words and have cried twice. But the idea hasn't gone away, and the friend I am writing with loves history as much as I do. So with her at my side, I have decided to go through with this.
I don't really have a good blurb. But this is just the, test one.
Franz and Japhet have been best friends since they were eight and seven. It has never bothered either of them that Japhet is a Jew, but things are changing in Germany and as rumors of war grow, Franz is constantly being told he shouldn't be friends with a Jew, let alone best friends. The time is coming when Franz is going to have to make a choice and the two friends are going to have to decide how much they value their friendship.
I am a bit scared, attempting this. I have the ideas of where I want to go with it, but getting through it is not going to be easy. But I am hoping I can finish, because I do like the plot.
The title I am pretty sure I am going to stick with is Brothers-in-Arms.
What do you all think?
And that said, I think I will take a moment to peer through the internet and inquire of my NaNo buddy. (You know who you are, you dear Bucky of mine you.) (And no, I don't use fake names for my friends because their identity needs to be kept secret. I just like nicknames - if you hadn't noticed, since I go by Jack - and I like to use them even when there is no point.)
Anyways, 5000. 5000. What is your count you NaNo buddy of mine you?
One more thing though, because I am a bit pleased with this. I have a snippet.....I know, right? Title and snippet all in one day! (Don't get used to it, it isn't going to be a habit.)
1944“I've doubted your loyalty since the day I met you.” The sneer showed every bit of hate in Stein's heart as he scowled at Franz. Hate he had never been good at keeping hidden.“Just shot me and get it over with,” Japhet whispered, his voice cracking as he tried to keep his feet under him. “You've taken everything else from me, why not my life?”“You have no authority to shot him!” Franz exclaimed, interrupting and glaring at both Japhet and Stein. “You weren't given the orders to do so!”“He is a Jew, I don't need orders!” Stein spat. “You think anyone is going to quibble over the life of one Jew? And besides, who said anything about me shooting him?”He turned his head and gave Franz a look as cold as ice, before motioning to the pistol holstered at Franz's side.
“Like I said before. I've had questions about which side your loyalty really lies on. I want these questions put to rest. Which will it be? Kill your childhood friend, or join him?”
Quote is from The Monument's Men, after the war is one and the men are leaving Germany.
Allons-y!
"I'm Prince Caspian!" "No you're not, get off."
I was sent a proof copy of Second Son to read and write an honest review. Well, I read it, so here is my review.
Second Son is book two in the Minstrel's Song series. I read book one - King's Warrior - a year or so ago and really enjoyed it, especially the character Brant. Mysterious, stern, slightly gloomy - pretty much everything I like in a character. When I found out book two was going to be Brant's story before King's Warrior takes place I was delighted.
Rhoyan is the second son of the king and queen. For years there has never been a second prince born and gossip flies as his birth fits with an ancient prophecy about a second son saving the kingdom. Rhoyan spends his young life unaware of the expectation being placed on him. All he cares about his having adventures with is older brother - who is also his best friend. But with so much being placed on him, it is only a matter of time before he and his brother learn about the prophecy, one which will forever change their lives.
Since I knew what happened to the characters, since this a prequel to book one, I didn't think I would be surprised a lot by this book - or saddened by it. I knew the brothers' fate, so I thought I would be able to handle their story as boys together. I was wrong.
Even knowing what was coming, when it actually started to happen I was still sad. And there were still plenty of surprises, though even if there hadn't been I wouldn't have minded. (This was Brant's story after all, I got to spent 400 pages with him, who cares about being shocked?) (Like I said though, there were surprises. Sometimes they were jaw dropping surprises.) There was also a lot of action and some amazing friendship moments. And sorrow. I almost cried in about three parts, and at the end I had tears in my eyes - mostly because I knew what happened to everyone in King's Warrior...
A lot of the book is about Brant's travels. He is very restless and goes far and wide, meeting people and fighting Hydras - yes, Hydras, because he is cool - and Dragons. A lot of the side characters he meets are fun and I was sad whenever he parted ways from them. One or two I was especially sad to say good bye too.
There was also one part in the book where I greatly admired Jenelle, who I know loves The Lord of the Rings. A lot. In the book the characters are traveling and hear trouble behind them and one says, "Horses! Behind us! Off the road now!" When I was reading it I was wondering the extent of self control Jenelle might have had to use NOT to say, "Off the road! Quick!" On that note, I believe she was able to sneak in a Lord of the Rings' reference later in the book. A wizard is talking about someone and says, "He is a relation of your mother's, son of a third cousin twice removed." (Like I said, I don't know if it is a sneaked in reference, but it made me giggle and hope I'm not the only Author who tries to slyly sneak in references into books.)
After finishing Second Son I wanted to start King's Warrior and read it again. Sadly, my reading list was too long, but I plan to re-read both. This has fast become one of my top favourite Fantasy series and I am already bouncing around waiting for book three.
For anyone who loves Fantasy and Dragons and heroes - and hilarious proposals - I strongly suggest this book.
You can find Jenelle's website HERE!!!!!
*** I should be back tomorrow. I have an announcement, I think. I need to get in contact with someone and make sure we have our dates right, but I SHOULD have something to share.
Quote is from the Prince Caspian bloopers.
Allons-y!
Second Son is book two in the Minstrel's Song series. I read book one - King's Warrior - a year or so ago and really enjoyed it, especially the character Brant. Mysterious, stern, slightly gloomy - pretty much everything I like in a character. When I found out book two was going to be Brant's story before King's Warrior takes place I was delighted.
Rhoyan is the second son of the king and queen. For years there has never been a second prince born and gossip flies as his birth fits with an ancient prophecy about a second son saving the kingdom. Rhoyan spends his young life unaware of the expectation being placed on him. All he cares about his having adventures with is older brother - who is also his best friend. But with so much being placed on him, it is only a matter of time before he and his brother learn about the prophecy, one which will forever change their lives.
Since I knew what happened to the characters, since this a prequel to book one, I didn't think I would be surprised a lot by this book - or saddened by it. I knew the brothers' fate, so I thought I would be able to handle their story as boys together. I was wrong.
Even knowing what was coming, when it actually started to happen I was still sad. And there were still plenty of surprises, though even if there hadn't been I wouldn't have minded. (This was Brant's story after all, I got to spent 400 pages with him, who cares about being shocked?) (Like I said though, there were surprises. Sometimes they were jaw dropping surprises.) There was also a lot of action and some amazing friendship moments. And sorrow. I almost cried in about three parts, and at the end I had tears in my eyes - mostly because I knew what happened to everyone in King's Warrior...
A lot of the book is about Brant's travels. He is very restless and goes far and wide, meeting people and fighting Hydras - yes, Hydras, because he is cool - and Dragons. A lot of the side characters he meets are fun and I was sad whenever he parted ways from them. One or two I was especially sad to say good bye too.
There was also one part in the book where I greatly admired Jenelle, who I know loves The Lord of the Rings. A lot. In the book the characters are traveling and hear trouble behind them and one says, "Horses! Behind us! Off the road now!" When I was reading it I was wondering the extent of self control Jenelle might have had to use NOT to say, "Off the road! Quick!" On that note, I believe she was able to sneak in a Lord of the Rings' reference later in the book. A wizard is talking about someone and says, "He is a relation of your mother's, son of a third cousin twice removed." (Like I said, I don't know if it is a sneaked in reference, but it made me giggle and hope I'm not the only Author who tries to slyly sneak in references into books.)
After finishing Second Son I wanted to start King's Warrior and read it again. Sadly, my reading list was too long, but I plan to re-read both. This has fast become one of my top favourite Fantasy series and I am already bouncing around waiting for book three.
For anyone who loves Fantasy and Dragons and heroes - and hilarious proposals - I strongly suggest this book.
You can find Jenelle's website HERE!!!!!
*** I should be back tomorrow. I have an announcement, I think. I need to get in contact with someone and make sure we have our dates right, but I SHOULD have something to share.
Quote is from the Prince Caspian bloopers.
Allons-y!
May 30, 2014
"You'll be jealous wrinkly old hags.
Wherein Jack Reveals A Cover
I have the hardest time figuring out how to begin these posts. Mostly because I do them in the middle of all of my editing and formatting, and I am always thinking of changes I need to make and things that need to be added to the book and taken out.
In spite of all of that, today is the 31st, which means I have a cover reveal.
I guess I can be professional about this. That will be my new fallback, attempted professionalism.
*Adjusts bow tie* I bet you're all wondering why I asked you here today.
*Does the Epic Bucky Dagger Flip* Oh wait, just ruined the effect, didn't I?
Okay, here, how is this? I will re-post the blurb, that is professional.
Upon learning he is one of the sons of the now dead king, Prince Lachlan is forced to leave the only home he has ever known. Fleeing for his life, his step-brothers a step behind, Lachlan finds safety and friendship with a young seamstress named Magda, a hermit, an Elf, and two Dwarf brothers. Determined to keep the young prince alive, Magda and the others seek out help in the surrounding Nations.
Everywhere they go, the fugitives are constantly turned away. They are followed by Lachlan's half- brothers who are determined to kill him so that one of them might take their father's crown and become the next king. With every place Lachlan is taken, his brothers close in and when the finally catch up Lachlan is forced to face the question that has been haunting him since he left home.
Lachlan was saved in the hopes he would become a better king then his father and his brothers. But the last thing he wants is to sit on the throne. If he refuses the crown, will there be anyone willing to fight to keep him alive?
(I attempted to rework it a little, after getting some tips last time I posted it. What does everything think? Suggestions? I never turn away tips and suggestions! All help is welcome 8-D)
I do have a book trailer, but it is not uploading for some reason. I will work on it and see if I can find the problem and get it up later next week. For now.......
Here it is!
What do you all think?
Quote is from SHIELD. I probably used it, but I like it. It is when Fitz is picking on Skye and Simmons, who were picking on him because he looks younger than he is.
Allons-y!!
I have the hardest time figuring out how to begin these posts. Mostly because I do them in the middle of all of my editing and formatting, and I am always thinking of changes I need to make and things that need to be added to the book and taken out.
In spite of all of that, today is the 31st, which means I have a cover reveal.
I guess I can be professional about this. That will be my new fallback, attempted professionalism.
*Adjusts bow tie* I bet you're all wondering why I asked you here today.
*Does the Epic Bucky Dagger Flip* Oh wait, just ruined the effect, didn't I?
Okay, here, how is this? I will re-post the blurb, that is professional.
Upon learning he is one of the sons of the now dead king, Prince Lachlan is forced to leave the only home he has ever known. Fleeing for his life, his step-brothers a step behind, Lachlan finds safety and friendship with a young seamstress named Magda, a hermit, an Elf, and two Dwarf brothers. Determined to keep the young prince alive, Magda and the others seek out help in the surrounding Nations.
Everywhere they go, the fugitives are constantly turned away. They are followed by Lachlan's half- brothers who are determined to kill him so that one of them might take their father's crown and become the next king. With every place Lachlan is taken, his brothers close in and when the finally catch up Lachlan is forced to face the question that has been haunting him since he left home.
Lachlan was saved in the hopes he would become a better king then his father and his brothers. But the last thing he wants is to sit on the throne. If he refuses the crown, will there be anyone willing to fight to keep him alive?
(I attempted to rework it a little, after getting some tips last time I posted it. What does everything think? Suggestions? I never turn away tips and suggestions! All help is welcome 8-D)
I do have a book trailer, but it is not uploading for some reason. I will work on it and see if I can find the problem and get it up later next week. For now.......
Here it is!
What do you all think?
Quote is from SHIELD. I probably used it, but I like it. It is when Fitz is picking on Skye and Simmons, who were picking on him because he looks younger than he is.
Allons-y!!
May 29, 2014
"Shame on you. You should go run another lap. I assume you just did."
Today I have a guest post from Cherie Reich, who is celebrating the release of her book, Reborn! The guest post is part of her blog tour.***The Chosen One / Hero’s Journey Trope
A common trope in high and epic fantasy is the chosen one, which often follows the hero’s journey. A young person goes from a small place to a big one. Along the way, the person picks up some friends, some enemies, and usually a mentor. Somehow the person misses how special he/she is and learns along the way that he/she is important in saving the world.
It’s a good trope to have, and I used it some in Reborn. Yssa grew up on the small island of Guntas (born on the even smaller island Mournia). At age seventeen, she journeyed to the City of Amora, the largest city in the kingdom. She finds new friends and new enemies along the way, and it is up to her to change the terrible Fate awaiting the kingdom.
But I like to mix things up with tropes too. For one, Yssa has known all along she’s special. She grew up knowing she was the Phoenix Prophetess, although she still doesn’t realize quite how special she is beyond seeing the past, present, and future and having the ability to challenge Fate. For two, although Yssa walked in dreams with her mentor, I kinda get rid of him when she meets him. It’d be like killing off Gandalf after he tells Bilbo to go on an adventure or Dumbledore right after he drops Harry off at the Dursleys. Getting rid of the mentor makes Yssa much less prepared for what she’s facing as she continues along her heroic journey.
Do you use tropes in your work? How do you change them up?***To save a kingdom, a prophetess must challenge Fate.
On the day of Yssa’s death and rebirth, the god Apenth chose her as the Phoenix Prophetess.
Sea serpents and gods endanger the young prophetess’s journey and sour the omens. Yssa is cursed instead of blessed, and her duties at the Temple of Apenth prove it. She spends her days reading dusty scrolls, which does nothing to help her forget Tym, the boy back home. But the annoying yet gorgeous ferryman’s son Liam proves to be a distraction she can’t predict, even though he rarely leaves her alone for two sand grains.
Her boring temple life screeches to a halt when visions of her parents’ murders consume her. Yssa races across an ocean to stop the future. If she can’t change Fate, she’ll refuse to be the Phoenix Prophetess any longer. Fate, however, has other plans for her and the kingdom.
Yssa must either accept her destiny or fight to change Fate.
Available in Ebook and Print!To purchase: Amazon | Createspace | Google Play | Kobo | Nook | OmniLit | Smashwords | Other Retailers
Click here to add on Goodreads .
A self-proclaimed bookworm, Cherie Reich is a speculative fiction writer and library assistant living in Virginia. Her short stories have appeared in magazines and anthologies, and her books include the horror collection Nightmare, a space fantasy novella collection titled Gravity, and the fantasy series The Foxwick Chronicles and The Fate Challenges. Reborn is her debut novel. She is Vice President of Valley Writers and a member of the Virginia Writers Club and Untethered Realms. For more information, please visit her website .
As part of her book's release, Cherie is having a giveaway with some amazing prizes. Sadly, I still can't figure out how to get the links to work for the giveaway box. But you can find it on her website - and you really should go and check it out. It is a great giveaway!
*** Reborn was one of the books I was sent an early copy of to read and review. For those who would like to read my review it can be found on my goodread's page, HERE!!!!!!!!!!!
Be sure to stop back by tomorrow as I will be revealing the cover of my soon to be published book, A Test of Loyalty.
Quote is from The Winter Soldier when Steve and Sam first meet.
Allons-y!
A common trope in high and epic fantasy is the chosen one, which often follows the hero’s journey. A young person goes from a small place to a big one. Along the way, the person picks up some friends, some enemies, and usually a mentor. Somehow the person misses how special he/she is and learns along the way that he/she is important in saving the world.
It’s a good trope to have, and I used it some in Reborn. Yssa grew up on the small island of Guntas (born on the even smaller island Mournia). At age seventeen, she journeyed to the City of Amora, the largest city in the kingdom. She finds new friends and new enemies along the way, and it is up to her to change the terrible Fate awaiting the kingdom.
But I like to mix things up with tropes too. For one, Yssa has known all along she’s special. She grew up knowing she was the Phoenix Prophetess, although she still doesn’t realize quite how special she is beyond seeing the past, present, and future and having the ability to challenge Fate. For two, although Yssa walked in dreams with her mentor, I kinda get rid of him when she meets him. It’d be like killing off Gandalf after he tells Bilbo to go on an adventure or Dumbledore right after he drops Harry off at the Dursleys. Getting rid of the mentor makes Yssa much less prepared for what she’s facing as she continues along her heroic journey.
Do you use tropes in your work? How do you change them up?***To save a kingdom, a prophetess must challenge Fate.
On the day of Yssa’s death and rebirth, the god Apenth chose her as the Phoenix Prophetess.
Sea serpents and gods endanger the young prophetess’s journey and sour the omens. Yssa is cursed instead of blessed, and her duties at the Temple of Apenth prove it. She spends her days reading dusty scrolls, which does nothing to help her forget Tym, the boy back home. But the annoying yet gorgeous ferryman’s son Liam proves to be a distraction she can’t predict, even though he rarely leaves her alone for two sand grains.
Her boring temple life screeches to a halt when visions of her parents’ murders consume her. Yssa races across an ocean to stop the future. If she can’t change Fate, she’ll refuse to be the Phoenix Prophetess any longer. Fate, however, has other plans for her and the kingdom.
Yssa must either accept her destiny or fight to change Fate.
Available in Ebook and Print!To purchase: Amazon | Createspace | Google Play | Kobo | Nook | OmniLit | Smashwords | Other Retailers
Click here to add on Goodreads .
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A self-proclaimed bookworm, Cherie Reich is a speculative fiction writer and library assistant living in Virginia. Her short stories have appeared in magazines and anthologies, and her books include the horror collection Nightmare, a space fantasy novella collection titled Gravity, and the fantasy series The Foxwick Chronicles and The Fate Challenges. Reborn is her debut novel. She is Vice President of Valley Writers and a member of the Virginia Writers Club and Untethered Realms. For more information, please visit her website .
As part of her book's release, Cherie is having a giveaway with some amazing prizes. Sadly, I still can't figure out how to get the links to work for the giveaway box. But you can find it on her website - and you really should go and check it out. It is a great giveaway!
*** Reborn was one of the books I was sent an early copy of to read and review. For those who would like to read my review it can be found on my goodread's page, HERE!!!!!!!!!!!Be sure to stop back by tomorrow as I will be revealing the cover of my soon to be published book, A Test of Loyalty.
Quote is from The Winter Soldier when Steve and Sam first meet.
Allons-y!
May 27, 2014
"It seems to run on some form of electricity."
Wherein Jack doesn't feel like having a Chick Flick moment, but is happy nonetheless.
I was, I don't remember what I was doing. It was something though, when I noticed that I have been around here since 2011, of May. That means as of this month I have been sprouting rambling words of - well, not wisdom persay, but whatever it is we want to call it - for three years. That is no stellar record I know, nothing like Doctor Who, but pretty impressive considering the fact I didn't think I was going to last for a month when I first started.
I have mentioned it before, but I've been here three years, so I will bring it up again. I started this blog up when I decided that I was going to take my writing seriously and I was going to publish. (WAS. I kept telling myself the was. I was going to do it. Even if it killed me. Which, it did feel like it was going to kill me.)
As I thought, I almost gave up after my first month. Keeping a blog was hard. I had to keep coming up with things to right about and after the first week I'd run out of subjects. And I couldn't find anyone who was interested in the things I had to say. If no one read my blog they wouldn't read my book, and - well, on and on I whined about it.
Thankfully I had this special friend back then. She took the time to read all of my posts and comment, she told me I was doing great, she put up with me the times I acted like a baby. She is the only reason I lasted more than a month.
Now look at me.
Three years and I am sitting at my desk buried under a pile of work, with three books published. Some days that will really hit me and I will have to sit back and stare at the wall for a while as it tries to sink in.
My scheme was insane what I started. Picking a pen name and hiding my real name as best I could. Not showing anyone who I am - not that you all would recognize me even if you could see me. Even my friend who was helping me with everything wasn't sure it would work. Who would care about an Author no one knew anything about? I still don't know if it was the best plan I've ever come up with. Maybe it would have been better to tell everyone who I am really am, but it has been a lot of fun and that has to count for something, right?
Of course, the past three years haven't been all fun and everything. They were really hard, not just trying to publish and make myself better known, but just became of things happening in my life. They've probably been the roughest years I ever faced. But I wouldn't trade them for anything better.
I've met some wonderful friends. I've met amazing Authors and got to read some great books I wouldn't have heard of otherwise.
And now...well, now it seems like you are going to be stuck with me for another three years. I'm kind of hard to get rid of once I show up.
I'd say more but I am having Skype issues and need to go and threaten it.
Before I go though. On the 31st I will be revealing my cover for A Test of Loyalty! (Exciting, right?)
And don't forget about the contest! Details on the side bar.
ALLONS-Y!
I was, I don't remember what I was doing. It was something though, when I noticed that I have been around here since 2011, of May. That means as of this month I have been sprouting rambling words of - well, not wisdom persay, but whatever it is we want to call it - for three years. That is no stellar record I know, nothing like Doctor Who, but pretty impressive considering the fact I didn't think I was going to last for a month when I first started.
I have mentioned it before, but I've been here three years, so I will bring it up again. I started this blog up when I decided that I was going to take my writing seriously and I was going to publish. (WAS. I kept telling myself the was. I was going to do it. Even if it killed me. Which, it did feel like it was going to kill me.)
As I thought, I almost gave up after my first month. Keeping a blog was hard. I had to keep coming up with things to right about and after the first week I'd run out of subjects. And I couldn't find anyone who was interested in the things I had to say. If no one read my blog they wouldn't read my book, and - well, on and on I whined about it.
Thankfully I had this special friend back then. She took the time to read all of my posts and comment, she told me I was doing great, she put up with me the times I acted like a baby. She is the only reason I lasted more than a month.
Now look at me.
Three years and I am sitting at my desk buried under a pile of work, with three books published. Some days that will really hit me and I will have to sit back and stare at the wall for a while as it tries to sink in.
My scheme was insane what I started. Picking a pen name and hiding my real name as best I could. Not showing anyone who I am - not that you all would recognize me even if you could see me. Even my friend who was helping me with everything wasn't sure it would work. Who would care about an Author no one knew anything about? I still don't know if it was the best plan I've ever come up with. Maybe it would have been better to tell everyone who I am really am, but it has been a lot of fun and that has to count for something, right?
Of course, the past three years haven't been all fun and everything. They were really hard, not just trying to publish and make myself better known, but just became of things happening in my life. They've probably been the roughest years I ever faced. But I wouldn't trade them for anything better.
I've met some wonderful friends. I've met amazing Authors and got to read some great books I wouldn't have heard of otherwise.
And now...well, now it seems like you are going to be stuck with me for another three years. I'm kind of hard to get rid of once I show up.
I'd say more but I am having Skype issues and need to go and threaten it.
Before I go though. On the 31st I will be revealing my cover for A Test of Loyalty! (Exciting, right?)
And don't forget about the contest! Details on the side bar.
ALLONS-Y!
May 24, 2014
"Blueberry?"
How Jack Edits and Publishes a Book. (As told by the Avengers.)
Beginning and feeling enthusiastic
Realizing she got a late start and her deadline is catching up to her
Giving herself a pep talk
Getting a boast of determination and decides nothing is going to get in her way
Enjoying a few pages were she feels in charge of everything and believes it is all working out for her
Coming across a plot hole where her characters refused to tell her what they had planned
Tries to sweet talk them into helping her out
Begins to lose patience
Begins to wonder if this is some form of revenge for some of the bad things she has put them through
Begs them to take things seriously
Starts to wish for an escape route
Gets into arguments
Tries to stand up for herself and fails miserably
Works out a plot everyone likes
Once again tries to look cool, but is not as cool this time
Works at explaining all of the little NaNo things that were never meant to be explained
Realizing bringing back dead guys to keep the plot moving is a bad idea
Is forced to kill them
Works on the bad guy's back story and realizes she kind of likes him now
Discovers the bad guy doesn't share her feelings and is going to put up a fight
Tries to convince everyone else they should be on her side and not the bad guy's
Has to use the puppy dog eyes which fail
Insults the bad guy because that always works
Decides to come up with a new plan when the bad guy fights back
Convinces the heroes she is cool
Puts the bad guy in his place and ends his uprising
Endures the heroes gloating over the belief they did everything on their own
Tries to get back to work
Now has to try and get the heroes to stop thinking so highly of themselves
Starts to have, "I am the Author around here," talks with them
Tries to ignore their, "Is that so?" looks
Beginning to work on confusing plot holes
Trying to keep all of the side characters straight
Instantly begins to set in with feelings of being overwhelmed
Realizes in the middle of editing she has forgotten to do all of the other important things, such as formatting, book cover, trailer, and marketing. Begins doing twenty things at once to catch up
Begins to question life choices and looks into other options
Forgets what sleep is
Begins to look and feel like a zombie
Forgets how the English language works and stares at the screen, hoping words will return to her
Arrives at the part where two characters randomly and unexpectedly fell in love
Remembers she understands little about romance and isn't sure what to do with them
Tells in love characters they are on their own and she wishes the best for them
Gets to the depressing scenes she hated writing in the first place
Spends a week walking around, ready to cry at any moment
Researches things that could get her in trouble if the police ever looked at her computer - such as, "How do you kill someone with a straw and toothpaste?" - to make sure her battle is believable
Nears the end of editing and begins to feel pretty proud of herself
Characters decide that can't happen and plot one final shock
Moment of pride is short lived and horror takes its place as she discovers the last minute twist that was thrown in just to ruin her day
Can't believe it happened and is secretly pleased with it because it is a cool twist
Shows displeasure to characters so they won't see that she is pleased and get big heads over it. Characters are not so easily fooled and laugh down at her, believing themselves the cleverest beings in the world
Charges into publishing only to have everything fall apart on her
Faces moments of despair and doubt while characters plot next book without informing her of any new ideas they have
Tries not to yell too much at publishing problems, company, mishaps, computer, cat, family, random strangers, best friends, and those annoying flies that speed around her head as the deadline looms closer
Begins to throw pencils at anyone who enters her room while she is buried under piles of important work
Realizes her characters never gave up on her and feels an inspiring moment of comradeship with them
Finishes up all of the last minute complications and realizes she somehow survived
Hits the publish button
Shares another touching moment with her characters
Finally leaves her room only to realize she no longer knows what century it is. Feels completely lost and alone and isn't even sure what to do about these strange human beings that she keeps running into
Decides it doesn't matter, goes out for Shawarma with all her characters and takes a nap
Okay, so it was more told by Bucky and Steve, but who cares?
That is all. I have to get back to work because I am right now on the feeling proud of myself stage, and I have to prepare for the last minute twist.
I ran out of Captain America quotes till I am able to buy the movie and watch it again. So you get one from The Avengers instead.
ALLONS-Y!!!
Beginning and feeling enthusiastic
Realizing she got a late start and her deadline is catching up to her
Giving herself a pep talk
Getting a boast of determination and decides nothing is going to get in her way
Enjoying a few pages were she feels in charge of everything and believes it is all working out for her
Coming across a plot hole where her characters refused to tell her what they had planned
Tries to sweet talk them into helping her out
Begins to lose patience
Begins to wonder if this is some form of revenge for some of the bad things she has put them through
Begs them to take things seriously
Starts to wish for an escape route
Gets into arguments
Tries to stand up for herself and fails miserably
Works out a plot everyone likes
Once again tries to look cool, but is not as cool this time
Works at explaining all of the little NaNo things that were never meant to be explained
Realizing bringing back dead guys to keep the plot moving is a bad idea
Is forced to kill them
Works on the bad guy's back story and realizes she kind of likes him now
Discovers the bad guy doesn't share her feelings and is going to put up a fight
Tries to convince everyone else they should be on her side and not the bad guy's
Has to use the puppy dog eyes which fail
Insults the bad guy because that always works
Decides to come up with a new plan when the bad guy fights back
Convinces the heroes she is cool
Puts the bad guy in his place and ends his uprising
Endures the heroes gloating over the belief they did everything on their own
Tries to get back to work
Now has to try and get the heroes to stop thinking so highly of themselves
Starts to have, "I am the Author around here," talks with them
Tries to ignore their, "Is that so?" looks
Beginning to work on confusing plot holes
Trying to keep all of the side characters straight
Instantly begins to set in with feelings of being overwhelmed
Realizes in the middle of editing she has forgotten to do all of the other important things, such as formatting, book cover, trailer, and marketing. Begins doing twenty things at once to catch up
Begins to question life choices and looks into other options
Forgets what sleep is
Begins to look and feel like a zombie
Forgets how the English language works and stares at the screen, hoping words will return to her
Arrives at the part where two characters randomly and unexpectedly fell in love
Remembers she understands little about romance and isn't sure what to do with them
Tells in love characters they are on their own and she wishes the best for them
Gets to the depressing scenes she hated writing in the first place
Spends a week walking around, ready to cry at any moment
Researches things that could get her in trouble if the police ever looked at her computer - such as, "How do you kill someone with a straw and toothpaste?" - to make sure her battle is believable
Nears the end of editing and begins to feel pretty proud of herself
Characters decide that can't happen and plot one final shock
Moment of pride is short lived and horror takes its place as she discovers the last minute twist that was thrown in just to ruin her day
Can't believe it happened and is secretly pleased with it because it is a cool twist
Shows displeasure to characters so they won't see that she is pleased and get big heads over it. Characters are not so easily fooled and laugh down at her, believing themselves the cleverest beings in the world
Charges into publishing only to have everything fall apart on her
Faces moments of despair and doubt while characters plot next book without informing her of any new ideas they have
Tries not to yell too much at publishing problems, company, mishaps, computer, cat, family, random strangers, best friends, and those annoying flies that speed around her head as the deadline looms closer
Begins to throw pencils at anyone who enters her room while she is buried under piles of important work
Realizes her characters never gave up on her and feels an inspiring moment of comradeship with them
Finishes up all of the last minute complications and realizes she somehow survived
Hits the publish button
Shares another touching moment with her characters
Finally leaves her room only to realize she no longer knows what century it is. Feels completely lost and alone and isn't even sure what to do about these strange human beings that she keeps running into
Decides it doesn't matter, goes out for Shawarma with all her characters and takes a napOkay, so it was more told by Bucky and Steve, but who cares?
That is all. I have to get back to work because I am right now on the feeling proud of myself stage, and I have to prepare for the last minute twist.
I ran out of Captain America quotes till I am able to buy the movie and watch it again. So you get one from The Avengers instead.
ALLONS-Y!!!
May 22, 2014
"Oh, my fiance was just helping me pick out honeymoon destinations." "Yeah...we're getting married."
Wherein Jack has a long post filled with amazing things
Today I am taking part in the book party for Jaye L. Knight's book Resistance! (I joined in the cover reveal a while back. You might remember.)
This is one of the books I was asked to read and review an early copy of. My review will be in this post. But first.
About the Book
“Don’t you know? Animals like you have no soul.”
Could God ever love a half-blood all of society looks upon with such fear and disdain? Jace once believed so, but when a tragic loss shatters the only peace he’s ever known, his faith crumbles as the nagging doubts he’s tried to put behind him descend on his grieving heart. With them come the haunting memories of the bloodstained past he longs to forget, but can never escape.
Taken from home at a young age and raised to serve the emperor, Kyrin Altair lives every day under a dangerous pretense of loyalty. After her unique observation skills and perfect memory place her into direct service to the emperor, Kyrin finds herself in further jeopardy as it becomes increasingly difficult to hide her belief in Elôm, the one true God.
Following the emperor’s declaration to enforce the worship of false gods under the penalty of death, many lives are endangered. But there are those willing to risk everything to take a stand and offer aid to the persecuted. With their lives traveling paths they never could have imagined, Jace and Kyrin must fight to overcome their own fears and conflicts with society as they become part of the resistance.
Available for purchase on Amazon May 20th!
View book extras at www.ilyonchronicles.blogspot.com.
About the Author
JAYE L. KNIGHT is a 25-year-old independent author with a passion for writing Christian fantasy and clean NA (New Adult) fiction. Armed with an active imagination and love for adventure, Jaye weaves stories of truth, faith, and courage with the message that even in the deepest darkness, God's love shines as a light to offer hope.
Jaye is a homeschool graduate and has been penning stories since the age of eight. She was previously published as Molly Evangeline. You can learn about her latest writing projects at www.jayelknight.com.Social Media LinksFacebook Author PageFacebook Series PageTwitterPinterestGoogle+ Author PageGoogle+ Series PageYouTubeAuthor BlogSeries Blog
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Giveaway Code
Immerse yourself in the world of Ilyon! Fill out the Rafflecopter form below for a chance to win an autographed copy of Resistance(Book 1 in the “Ilyon Chronicles” series), a Resistance-inspired necklace crafted by the author (Jaye L. Knight), a Better Homes “Warm Rustic Woods” candle, and a wolf paw leather bookmark from Lodgepole Leathercraft. This giveaway is open to U.S. residents only .
http://www.rafflecopter.com/rafl/share-code/MTVjZWUzOTdmNzNhZTBkM2QzNmI4OTkwN2ZjZDVhOjMw/
For another part of the party I was given the chance to interview Jace, one of the main characters in the book. (And my favourite one.)
1. Would you like to travel the world someday - if you could do so without people becoming angry with you or running away - or are you more the time who likes to keep close to home?
*shifts uncomfortably and clears throat* I’ve seen enough of the world. I was brought to quite a few cities in my days as a gladiator. I didn’t see much of them, but enough to know I don’t like them. I like home. It’s quiet and comfortable, and the only place I’ve ever felt that way. I just don’t think there’s anything of much interest to me outside of it.
2. Would you ever consider living with the ryriks? How do they feel about half-bloods?
No. They’re too violent. *winces* I couldn’t be part of their society. I’ve seen more than enough violence already. I think they might accept a half-blood, but would look down on them. I’d still be an outcast . . . same as I am now.
3. What are your thoughts on your Author? And do you consider yourself a good character or do you sometimes change the story because you know you can tell it better?
She likes to say we’re a lot alike. I suppose I wouldn’t have some of the struggles I do if we weren’t, but I guess I trust her. At least she puts a good purpose behind our suffering. Occasionally I step out and do something to surprise her, but for the most part I follow her directing. She knows me well enough to know where my story should go.
4. Do you like reading? Or do you think of it as a waste of time? (If you do like it, what are some of your favourite books?)
I only learned to read a couple of years ago, but I don’t put it to use very often. I wouldn’t necessarily consider it a waste of time. I’m sure there’s a lot to learn from books, but I prefer to be out hunting or learning things by experience.
5. I don't remember if it ever mentions in the book. It probably is, but I've been so wrapped up in your story I have forgotten. So, I will just ask. How did you find Tyra? What made you decide to keep a wolf as a pet? (Not that I am criticizing your choice in pets. I like her.)
Thank you, Jace. I know you don't like a lot of attention, and that interviews aren't much fun, so thank you for enduring mine.
I should have some kind of grand transition but this is me we are talking about so.....here is my review!!
I don't even know how to begin a review like this. Have you ever read one of those books you were expecting a lot from and it was so much better than all the expectations you put on it? If you have than you know how I feel.
I had read another series by Jaye and I loved it. Resistance was part of an even longer series and Jaye said she spent a lot of time working on the plot. I allowed myself to hope it was going to be amazing.
Resistance isn't your typical fantasy book. In the story the characters are faced with persecution when the government decides Christians are a threat to their false gods. The Christians are mostly outcasts, looked down upon by society. But things are changing and they know it won't be long before their lives are in danger.
Caught up in the middle of this is a girl named Kyrin. She works for the emperor because she has the gift of being able to discern what a person's real character is like. It is her job to sit and listen on important meetings so she might know if a person is lying to the emperor. Working so close to the man who hates anyone who disagrees with his gods, it isn't long before Kyrin is forced to choice a side, continue worshiping the one true God and maybe lose her life, or bow before the false ones and live.
I liked Kyrin. And I loved her relationship with her twin brother. Reading about them reminded me how rare it is to find a good brother and sister story and I hope there is more of them in the next book.
There were a lot of other characters I liked as well. I liked most of them, except the emperor, his wife, daughter, and some of his henchmen. But, of course, one wasn't supposed to like them.
My personal favourite though was Jace. Jace is a half blood ryrik - they are a race of violent, ill tempered beings who kill as a past time. Jace was bought out of slavery and shown love, but when tragedy strikes he forgets almost everything he has been told and again believes he is nothing more than a mindless animal who will kill anyone who gets close to him. He is nearly ready to give up on everything and just sit down and die because he believes it would be better for everyone.
Then he meets Kyrin and....well, you just have to read it.
Jace broke my heart and I fell in love with him. He was so sad and lonely, I often wanted to hug him and tell him over and over he was human and loved. (There is wonderful scene with him, where he has to decide between his ryrik instincts and his human side. That was my favourite scene in the whole book.)
Aside from the characters, the plot is well done and thought out. And the world is especially well done. Jaye put a lot of time and effort into it and it shows. Everything felt real and believable. And while some of the races she created had enough characteristics in them to feel fantasy, she changed them just enough that they are completely new. It is worth spending the time in her new world to get to know and see everything better.
This is another book I can highly recommend. It is listed as New Adult and it took me a while to figure out why. There are no suggestive scenes in it, I don't even remember there being a kiss, but some of the characters are tortured. Jaye does go into some detail, to show just what they went through and how they still stood for their faith. (A lot of it felt like the trails the early Christians went through.) There isn't unneeded detail, but things are described. Jaye balanced everything out well, but caution should be taken for younger readers.
It is, I believe, a book everyone should read at least once in their lifetime.
Now I should be going. I have one chapter left in the second Blade book before it is completed and I am hoping to finish it tonight.
Quote is from The Winter Soldier when Rodgers is trying out his lack of spy skills.
Allons-y!
Today I am taking part in the book party for Jaye L. Knight's book Resistance! (I joined in the cover reveal a while back. You might remember.)
This is one of the books I was asked to read and review an early copy of. My review will be in this post. But first.
About the Book
“Don’t you know? Animals like you have no soul.”
Could God ever love a half-blood all of society looks upon with such fear and disdain? Jace once believed so, but when a tragic loss shatters the only peace he’s ever known, his faith crumbles as the nagging doubts he’s tried to put behind him descend on his grieving heart. With them come the haunting memories of the bloodstained past he longs to forget, but can never escape.
Taken from home at a young age and raised to serve the emperor, Kyrin Altair lives every day under a dangerous pretense of loyalty. After her unique observation skills and perfect memory place her into direct service to the emperor, Kyrin finds herself in further jeopardy as it becomes increasingly difficult to hide her belief in Elôm, the one true God.
Following the emperor’s declaration to enforce the worship of false gods under the penalty of death, many lives are endangered. But there are those willing to risk everything to take a stand and offer aid to the persecuted. With their lives traveling paths they never could have imagined, Jace and Kyrin must fight to overcome their own fears and conflicts with society as they become part of the resistance.
Available for purchase on Amazon May 20th!
View book extras at www.ilyonchronicles.blogspot.com.
About the Author
JAYE L. KNIGHT is a 25-year-old independent author with a passion for writing Christian fantasy and clean NA (New Adult) fiction. Armed with an active imagination and love for adventure, Jaye weaves stories of truth, faith, and courage with the message that even in the deepest darkness, God's love shines as a light to offer hope.
Jaye is a homeschool graduate and has been penning stories since the age of eight. She was previously published as Molly Evangeline. You can learn about her latest writing projects at www.jayelknight.com.Social Media LinksFacebook Author PageFacebook Series PageTwitterPinterestGoogle+ Author PageGoogle+ Series PageYouTubeAuthor BlogSeries Blog
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Giveaway Code
Immerse yourself in the world of Ilyon! Fill out the Rafflecopter form below for a chance to win an autographed copy of Resistance(Book 1 in the “Ilyon Chronicles” series), a Resistance-inspired necklace crafted by the author (Jaye L. Knight), a Better Homes “Warm Rustic Woods” candle, and a wolf paw leather bookmark from Lodgepole Leathercraft. This giveaway is open to U.S. residents only .
http://www.rafflecopter.com/rafl/share-code/MTVjZWUzOTdmNzNhZTBkM2QzNmI4OTkwN2ZjZDVhOjMw/
For another part of the party I was given the chance to interview Jace, one of the main characters in the book. (And my favourite one.)
1. Would you like to travel the world someday - if you could do so without people becoming angry with you or running away - or are you more the time who likes to keep close to home?
*shifts uncomfortably and clears throat* I’ve seen enough of the world. I was brought to quite a few cities in my days as a gladiator. I didn’t see much of them, but enough to know I don’t like them. I like home. It’s quiet and comfortable, and the only place I’ve ever felt that way. I just don’t think there’s anything of much interest to me outside of it.
2. Would you ever consider living with the ryriks? How do they feel about half-bloods?
No. They’re too violent. *winces* I couldn’t be part of their society. I’ve seen more than enough violence already. I think they might accept a half-blood, but would look down on them. I’d still be an outcast . . . same as I am now.
3. What are your thoughts on your Author? And do you consider yourself a good character or do you sometimes change the story because you know you can tell it better?
She likes to say we’re a lot alike. I suppose I wouldn’t have some of the struggles I do if we weren’t, but I guess I trust her. At least she puts a good purpose behind our suffering. Occasionally I step out and do something to surprise her, but for the most part I follow her directing. She knows me well enough to know where my story should go.
4. Do you like reading? Or do you think of it as a waste of time? (If you do like it, what are some of your favourite books?)
I only learned to read a couple of years ago, but I don’t put it to use very often. I wouldn’t necessarily consider it a waste of time. I’m sure there’s a lot to learn from books, but I prefer to be out hunting or learning things by experience.
5. I don't remember if it ever mentions in the book. It probably is, but I've been so wrapped up in your story I have forgotten. So, I will just ask. How did you find Tyra? What made you decide to keep a wolf as a pet? (Not that I am criticizing your choice in pets. I like her.)
Thank you, Jace. I know you don't like a lot of attention, and that interviews aren't much fun, so thank you for enduring mine.
I should have some kind of grand transition but this is me we are talking about so.....here is my review!!
I don't even know how to begin a review like this. Have you ever read one of those books you were expecting a lot from and it was so much better than all the expectations you put on it? If you have than you know how I feel.
I had read another series by Jaye and I loved it. Resistance was part of an even longer series and Jaye said she spent a lot of time working on the plot. I allowed myself to hope it was going to be amazing.
Resistance isn't your typical fantasy book. In the story the characters are faced with persecution when the government decides Christians are a threat to their false gods. The Christians are mostly outcasts, looked down upon by society. But things are changing and they know it won't be long before their lives are in danger.
Caught up in the middle of this is a girl named Kyrin. She works for the emperor because she has the gift of being able to discern what a person's real character is like. It is her job to sit and listen on important meetings so she might know if a person is lying to the emperor. Working so close to the man who hates anyone who disagrees with his gods, it isn't long before Kyrin is forced to choice a side, continue worshiping the one true God and maybe lose her life, or bow before the false ones and live.
I liked Kyrin. And I loved her relationship with her twin brother. Reading about them reminded me how rare it is to find a good brother and sister story and I hope there is more of them in the next book.
There were a lot of other characters I liked as well. I liked most of them, except the emperor, his wife, daughter, and some of his henchmen. But, of course, one wasn't supposed to like them.
My personal favourite though was Jace. Jace is a half blood ryrik - they are a race of violent, ill tempered beings who kill as a past time. Jace was bought out of slavery and shown love, but when tragedy strikes he forgets almost everything he has been told and again believes he is nothing more than a mindless animal who will kill anyone who gets close to him. He is nearly ready to give up on everything and just sit down and die because he believes it would be better for everyone.
Then he meets Kyrin and....well, you just have to read it.
Jace broke my heart and I fell in love with him. He was so sad and lonely, I often wanted to hug him and tell him over and over he was human and loved. (There is wonderful scene with him, where he has to decide between his ryrik instincts and his human side. That was my favourite scene in the whole book.)
Aside from the characters, the plot is well done and thought out. And the world is especially well done. Jaye put a lot of time and effort into it and it shows. Everything felt real and believable. And while some of the races she created had enough characteristics in them to feel fantasy, she changed them just enough that they are completely new. It is worth spending the time in her new world to get to know and see everything better.
This is another book I can highly recommend. It is listed as New Adult and it took me a while to figure out why. There are no suggestive scenes in it, I don't even remember there being a kiss, but some of the characters are tortured. Jaye does go into some detail, to show just what they went through and how they still stood for their faith. (A lot of it felt like the trails the early Christians went through.) There isn't unneeded detail, but things are described. Jaye balanced everything out well, but caution should be taken for younger readers.
It is, I believe, a book everyone should read at least once in their lifetime.
Now I should be going. I have one chapter left in the second Blade book before it is completed and I am hoping to finish it tonight.
Quote is from The Winter Soldier when Rodgers is trying out his lack of spy skills.
Allons-y!
May 21, 2014
"Will you shot me if I come out? Because then I won't come out."
The other day my friend and I were talking about the Bucky Knife Flip.
And our conversation went something like this.Her "I am going to learn how to do that." Me "Me too." Her "I am going to start with a spoon or something first though." Me ".............oh. That is a good idea. I was just going to start with my pocket knife. Maybe I should use a spoon too. I don't know how I would explain to the doctors why there is a knife stuck in my palm."
The moral of this story? I need friends, because I don't think things through and end up doing stupid things, coming up with better options AFTER it is too late.
I FINALLY made it out last night to get pictures for A Test of Loyalty's book cover. I have been working on editing them and am hoping to have everything ready by the end of May. Which means the cover release date should be on the 31st. (I say should because things like to happen....like tea)
I am close to finishing another round of editing. Locking myself in my room yesterday helped, I got three chapters done. Of course, by the end of the day I was kind of brain dead, but you know.
Lately I have been getting a lot of requests to read and review books which will be published soon. It hasn't been all that bad, because I love reading, but I sometimes sit back and think and then feel overwhelmed. (Part of it was because I was behind on my editing so long I didn't know how I was going to find the time to read.) I never thought I would run into the day where I didn't have time to read. It is a strange feeling. (Not that I am complaining any. I never complain about having to read.)
There really is no purpose to all of this. I am just trying not to go AWOL again. But I have to leave without any grand news or words of wisdom. I didn't get my chapter edited today and I refuse to fall behind again, so I need to go and do it now.
I will leave you, but come back tomorrow! I am taking part in fun book related things.
Quote is from Agents of SHIELD. (Anyone else near the end of the season? Having the same pains I have been over a certain someone?)
Allons-y!
