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February 6, 2014

Interesting Marketing by Amazon

By Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig


AmazonAmazon has been in the news recently because of growing pains (shipping issues regarding timely delivery) and other problems it’s experiencing…most notably their possible plans to spike the price for Amazon Prime in response to low 4th quarter profits.


But I’ve been noticing other things—marketing related—that I’ve found very interesting.  And it’s made me wonder if it’s possible to adapt some of our own promo activities.  One program that Amazon has launched that I was late discovering (I had a friend inform me of it) is the Kindle First program.  Basically, Amazon Prime customers can sign up for a monthly email that allows them to choose one of four books for a free download to their Kindle.  The cool thing is that these books aren’t yet released. They won’t launch until the following month.


My friend was amazed by this.  These were all releases from large publishers with the potential for big sales.  Why give them away for free each month?


To me, the answer was easy—to get reviews.  Books with more reviews get higher visibility on Amazon, resulting in more sales.  So, if a book launches and it’s already got 200 or 300 reviews or more on launch day…that can be a terrific sales tool.


How can we replicate something like that on our end, as self-publishers?  Well, to get early reviews, we do have some options.  We can delay a release for the purpose of garnering these reviews, order print copies of our new book, and hold a Goodreads giveaway.  We can hope those folks will write reviews (I’ve had mixed success with this for my Penguin ARCs).  Or we can connect with readers who have enjoyed our books previously and offer them an advance reader copy for a fair review.  These readers should disclose that they received the books for free in the hopes of a review.  The point is that this would be done in advance of the release.


I’m buying lots of books from Amazon.  I don’t mean to.  And as I’ve mentioned before, I’m thrifty.  But I get emails for Kindle Daily Deals and I buy on average 3 books a week.  I’ve always got a book to read.  I read quickly and then move on to the next one.  We can’t replicate the Kindle Daily Deal (or we’ll annoy readers to death if we announce a book special each day), but we might be able to do something with Amazon’s “Promotional Credit” program.


Basically, I purchased the latest Louise Penny book on January 25 and, immediately following the purchase, I received an email with the subject “Your Amazon.com Promotional Credit‏.”  The email stated: “Get a Popular Kindle Book for $0.99.


Purchase a qualifying mystery & thriller book for Kindle and get a credit to purchase a popular book for $0.99. Kindle books can be read on any Kindle device or with our free Kindle reading apps.”


A link directed me to a page that stated:

“If you received an email from Amazon.com with a link to this offer, you have qualified for a credit to purchase the Kindle books shown below for $0.99. The credit has already been applied to your account. Only the Kindle books below are eligible for this promotion – you can use your credit to purchase up to four of them for $0.99 each. To purchase a book, click on it, then click the “Buy” button. Please note that the price shown will not change to $0.99, but your code will be applied to your purchase automatically, reducing the purchase price of the item to $0.99. You may use your code toward multiple eligible book purchases (up to 4 in total). To make another purchase, simply come back to this page and select another Kindle book….Complete your order before this promotion expires at 11:59 p.m. (Pacific Time) on January 31, 2014.”


When I purchased the book, I had no idea it was part of a promotion.  Did I buy a $.99 book from Amazon after getting this email?  Yes, I did.  Again, I’m assuming this is Amazon and either authors or publishers collaborating to get readers of a particular genre introduced to a new author in that genre. And then buy more books at a regular price later.


So, here’s where I wonder if we could somehow set up cross-promotions with other authors in our genre.  Ours would have to be different, since we can’t send emails to readers after their purchases like a retailer can. I know everyone’s back matter in their ebooks is precious space (readers get upset if they think they have 2% of a book left to read, but then find it’s all acknowledgments and teaser chapters and promo).  But what if we offered a discount coupon code for our book in the back of a friend’s book?  Then, obviously, we’d have to either link to our own website or give an email address. We’d fulfill the coupon by sending  digital file ourselves, or we’d need to link to a retailer like Smashwords, which does have a way to promote using coupon codes.


I’ve been hooked by Amazon’s “Customers Who Bought This Item Also Bought” feature for years now.  It’s because the books listed are similar in some ways to a book I’ve just bought (in anticipation of a good read).  Apparently, this is called an “Application Programmable Interface,” or API.  No, there’s no way we can do that.  But what if there were an author, again, who wrote books very similar to ours?  In my case, regional humorous mysteries.  Couldn’t we trade out a “suggested reads” promo with each other?


And finally, there’s the Kindle Countdown Deals, which have had a bit of buzz online lately.  We can’t replicate this, but we can sign up to be part of it. The problem is that your book must be enrolled in KDP Select to do it.  I haven’t chosen to be part of KDP Select because of the exclusivity involved. I’m at the point where I’m making decent income from other retailers now and would rather not rock the boat.  This program does have merit, though.  You get a cool countdown clock on the book’s listing, along with a clearly reduced list price.  And you receive royalties on the regular price. It’s worth mulling over.


I think what appeals to me here are the fact that these are fairly easy, fairly non-confrontational means of getting our books into the hands of readers who may appreciate them.  And no, I’ll likely never get around to this stuff because I’ve not done any promo lately and am slammed with the books and the social media and business aspects as it is.  But it interests me.  Have y’all done any promo like this?  Seen it done effectively?  What do you think of some of the promo methods that Amazon had been employing lately?


 


 


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February 4, 2014

Self-Publishing Mistakes

By Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraigBody in the Backyard--smaller


Tax time is making me a bit reflective this year.  Maybe I didn’t have the time to reflect on Dec. 31st/Jan. 1 since I had a January 1 deadline…at any rate, I’m doing it now.


Tax time also always makes me think of ways I could improve.  It’s great that I’m selling books—but I’ve missed opportunities along the way.


I thought I’d share my mistakes here in case you might find yourself in the same boat with some of these things.  And mistakes are just opportunities to learn, after all.


Self-publishing mistakes I’ve made:


Waiting too long to venture into other formats.  This is a big one, seeing the income I’ve made since July that I could have been making prior to that.  Obviously, there can be some cost involved into moving into print (cover design and formatting, if you don’t do those things yourself) but audiobooks can be free.  I’m a cautious person and basically waited until readers literally wrote me and asked me to put these books in audio and print format. I wish I’d moved earlier on this.


Not reserving my cover designer/formatter in advance.  I’ve had to delay several releases because my cover designer or formatter was booked.  Good contract labor gets booked up fast in self-pub.  Ask early. Now I’m getting my covers done before I finish writing my books.


Giving readers a firm release date for my self-pubbed book too far in advance. Oh, this has bitten me several times now. When it comes to production, stuff happens.  Sometimes people get sick, sometimes they have family emergencies.  Sometimes they’re booked (see above).  Sometimes they have internet issues.  I have learned to add a week or so onto an estimated release date. Because readers will get in touch if the book isn’t out…ha!  And it has an unprofessional feel to it when you miss a deadline you’ve made with a reader.


Not monitoring sales.  Bad idea.  If I’m having a slow month (a year ago, this was the case), then I can run a sale…play with pricing.  If I don’t know I’m having a slow month, then I just get the sad little check 60 days later.


Not monitoring income/profits. Putting all our earnings in the same account as other income.  This is also bad.  If we’re making good income, we need to be thinking ahead: estimated tax payments in advance of tax time, money into our 401K/IRA, maybe have more withheld from our day job or our spouse’s day job.  It’s no fun to pay a ton of taxes unexpectedly.  And I’ve been informed that it’s very ill-advised to put your writing business income into your joint account/regular household account…it just doesn’t look great to the IRS, apparently. So maybe open a free regular checking account or credit union account that you only use for writing-related deposits. You can always transfer funds into your regular account afterward.  And you can use your writing checking account to write checks for supplies, pay contract labor, etc.


Not outlining the next book in the series when finishing one.  With the kind of gaps in self-publishing production that I’ve got to deal with as a hybrid writer (deadlines with the traditional publisher come first), this was a problem I’m now addressing.  It takes far too long for me to get my head back into a series after working on a book in a different series.


Not having a newsletter.  Readers had signed up for years for a newsletter that I didn’t ever send out.  That wasn’t smart.  I finally corrected this last year.  If they are going to our website and taking the time to fill out the registration form for our newsletter…we should send the thing out to them.


Not doing Goodreads giveaways for the self-pubbed books.   This promo thing worked out well for my traditionally published books.  Why didn’t I do it for my CreateSpace Myrtle Clover books?  Still haven’t done this, but need to fix that soon.  It simply means ordering however many CreateSpace books I need for the giveaway and then getting it listed on Goodreads.


No website extras for readers.  I’ve heard reader chatter about other writers’ websites and some of the extras they’ve seen on them.  Hmm.  I just haven’t gotten around to that yet. I did do a preview chapter for one of my books on the website.  It would probably be helpful if I did it for the upcoming book.  This is a static form of promo—you stick it up on your website once and then you’re done. Much easier than some of the social media networking we’re encouraged to do. And the one chapter I put up had readers interested, judging from feedback I received from them.


Not ramping up my self-pubbed content earlier.  I seemed to view my first self-pubbed book in 2011 as a one-off.


Not venturing into self-pub until late in 2011.  Yeah.  Should have been early 2010.  I had a book ready to go.


Not asking for my rights back (or confirming that I did hold those rights) earlier.  The reason I didn’t venture into self-pub earlier (as I mention above) is because I wasn’t sure how to get my rights back to the series or the characters.  The first book was traditionally published, but I wanted to self-publish others for the series.  I got my rights back in a short email exchange with the publisher…took about 10 minutes for me to pen the email and took the publisher about 10 minutes back.  Definitely should have explored that earlier.


There’s always room for improvement…I think last year was also the first time when I realized that this really is a small business I’m running.  I have contract labor.  I have legal and professional help.  I’ve got research and development for books.  There are areas that I’m not good at and I’m either working to learn more/do better with those or subcontract out for the things I really can’t do.


So these are the things I’d advise to keep an eye on for any writers interested in self-publishing.  What tips have you got?


 


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February 2, 2014

Resources for the Do-It-Yourselfer

by Julie Musil, @JulieMusilBoy Who Loved Fire

My hubby and I are die-hard do-it-yourselfers. The home we live in now sits on what used to be nothing but acres of wide open dirt and scrub oak. We brought utilities here. We built the house ourselves. Heck, I even helped paint the exterior of our house while carrying my 9-month-old son in a baby backpack. Yes, we’re crazy like that.

Call me psychotic, but I have a hard time paying someone to do what I can do myself.

When I decided to indie publish my novel, I took the same approach. Aside from hiring a freelance editor (A Little Red, Inc.) and cover designer (J. Allen Fielder), I did the whole project myself. In my opinion, editing and cover design are tasks for the pros. Some would say the same about painting the exterior of a house, but we won’t worry about that now :)

I scoured the Internet and blogs for resources. Here are some of my faves:


Indie Author Survival Guide, by Susan Kaye Quinn: Susan’s blog is a treasure trove of information, so definitely stop there first if you’re considering indie. Susan’s post about Making the Leap is what gave me the final push I needed to get my book out there. Indie Survival Guide drills deep into the nitty gritty details of what you need to do to indie publish. Formatting, paying formatters to avoid headaches, which markets to upload to and why, etc. Plus, this book is inspirational. Seriously, start with Susan.
Self Publishing Attack, by James Scott Bell: I’m a huge fangirl of Bell’s craft book, Plot & Structure. I admire his no-nonsense, regular-guy style. In Self Publishing Attack, Bell teaches indie authors how to put out a professional product, and how to treat your new venture as a business.
From Pages ’09 to Kindle Format in Minutes, by Garrick Staggs: I could’ve paid someone to format my book, but I was determined to learn how to do it myself. Sort of the “teach a man how to fish” thing. Most formatting help is geared toward Word, but I use Apple Pages. Staggs’ book helped with the language barrier. And get this—when I encountered a sticky formatting issue, I emailed the author directly (he gives his email at the end of the book for this purpose). He emailed me back and helped me work through the issue. More proof that writers are some of the most generous people I know.
Smashwords Style Guide: A great place to start if you’re formatting your own book. It’s full of useful advice on how to format a clean document. I used many of the tips in this guide until I came to a Pages roadblock. Then I picked up with the Pages to Kindle book.
Building Your Book for Kindle: Additional details on specifics such as uploading your book, previewing your book, and uploading a changed manuscript.
Forums: With every problem I encountered, someone else had already posted about it in a forum. I read the responses and was good to go. For KDP forums (Amazon), click here. CreateSpace forums (print) can be found here
Wordpreneur Peeps: 107 Successful Indie Publishers (including Elizabeth!): If you think indie publishing can be overwhelming, or that you don’t have what it takes, I know how you feel. This book features Regular Joe writers, people just like you and me, who jumped into indie publishing. Totally inspiring.


Time is precious. Money is precious. We must use both wisely. Will this psychotic do-it-yourselfer ever pay someone to do all the work for me? I won’t rule it out. Will I ever hire a painter to paint the exterior of my home? Well, my 9-month-old son is now 16. We can paint side by side, don’t you think?

Are you a do-it-yourselfer? Have you indie published? Did you do the work yourself or did you sub it out? Please share your favorite resources in the comments!

Julie Musil writes Young Adult novels from her rural home in Southern California,

Julie Musil


where she lives with her husband and three sons. She’s an obsessive reader who loves stories that grab the heart and won’t let go. Her novel The Boy Who Loved Fire is available now. For more information, or to stop by and say Hi, please visit Julie on her blog , on Twitter , and on Facebook .
 

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February 1, 2014

Twitterific Writing Links

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraigBlog


Twitterific links are fed into the Writer’s Knowledge Base search engine(developed by writer and software engineer Mike Fleming) which has over 23,000 free articles on writing related topics. It’s the search engine for writers.


Have a great week!


Using Amazon KDP’s New Cover Creator http://t.co/wqrhRrB0xN @nickdaws


7 Essential Questions of Plot— Do You Ask Them?  http://t.co/MauI0e3OXf @JennyHansenCA


Getting Physical: Ways to Make Your Characters Come Alive:  http://t.co/6qkI5L9NoX @RMFWriters


7 Lessons Learned from Half a Year of Writing Every Day:  http://t.co/grXieJRZwJ @jamietr


Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Super Bowl Recipe for a Crowd! http://t.co/pBTaQ30I8M @CleoCoyle


Writer of a Certain Age:  http://t.co/ENbgBQUySV @fay_weldon @NYTimes       


How to Write: A Year in Advice from Franzen, King, Hosseini, and More: http://t.co/FLrngrtL4p @JoeFassler @TheAtlantic


Top Social Media Mistakes Authors Make:  http://t.co/R1jrZCk2y6 @ediemelson


4 Things You Must Know About Reaching Your Writing Goals: http://t.co/APL0yz3bVw @carol_brill @womenwriters


3 Ways Authors Write in Excess (And How To Cut Back): http://t.co/D8pDM0ZfX7 @vgrefer


10 Ways to Introduce Conflict in Dialogue:  http://t.co/CjDObGaPOa @amandaonwriting  @writers_write    Why are there so many trilogies?  http://t.co/PP877igURk @jdiddyesquire @tordotcom


The importance of being able to focus solely on our writing: http://t.co/iCKsi4GbMz @flawritersconf @joannetlewis


7 Key Trends Of 2014 That Independent Filmmakers & Screenwriters Embrace: http://t.co/OXlZLGtcnp @raindance


The Magnificence of Middle Grade:  http://t.co/NZY0hqY71F @kellybarnhill


Will tracking reader data make for better books? http://t.co/lpQO7lPiCN  @nytimesbits @DavidStreitfeld


Using Story Beats To Increase Writing Speed:  http://t.co/D0vKtZpJhU @DavidGaughran


A look at happy story endings http://t.co/ZWXWMqez5o @jamigold


Best of Both Worlds: Hybrid Authors Up Close:  http://t.co/WPueUR1Twq @chuckwendig


How to Use Profanity And Other Raw Talk In Your Fiction:  http://t.co/fIRKWRd4r2 @ESimsAuthor @writersdigest


My Tax Time Income Revelations and…Is Writing is the Career We Can’t Retire From?  http://t.co/2MLGL8kstQ


10 Tricks For Writing Great Fight Scenes:  http://t.co/KkJk4VRNUx @raynehall


Crime fiction–instances where sleuths have passed the torch to the next generation: http://t.co/4GCZ7BrQif @mkinberg


Remember to back up blogs, too:  http://t.co/ZfwmbX1Dz9 @womenonwriting


Keeping it Real – Female Protagonists in YA Lit http://t.co/Zjh3ZPwxQz @JennWalkup


Crafting an Effective Beginning: Opening Image or Paragraph: http://t.co/442tsEI7zo @camillelaguire


3 Steps to Reading Harder, Better, Faster, Stronger: http://t.co/03LtP0dRJf @PeterDamien


Why Evil Overlords Need to be Competent http://t.co/jAKp8HfcVL @mharoldpage


Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Potato Casserole Revisited http://t.co/RbKOoAtUto @CleoCoyle


Audio Books First – A New Publishing Movement:  http://t.co/3WrmGEsBnw @Goodereader


10 Reasons Our Hero Needs Flaws http://t.co/1Hm750ZFlu @angelaackerman


Publishing: Between Revolution and Revolt:  http://t.co/v3qQUxphJt  @HughHowey @Porter_Anderson @rebecsmart


How 1 writer sold his book through serialization: http://t.co/4qxjnm2sbv @rchazzchute


What makes a book a classic?  http://t.co/A56KCZfWT8 @magiciansbook @salon


How to Write a Novel Based on Your Life Story–10 Tips:  http://t.co/zHpC9SJGqj @helenahalme


What it Takes to Be an Author http://t.co/Y2QfacUNCM @KristenEckstein


A Characterization Case Study: Jean Valjean and Javert from “Les Misérables”:  http://t.co/T79fnGaRyY @vgrefer


The most prolific author you’ve never heard of:  http://t.co/ffiiTHIOuc @melvillehouse


5 Ways to Use Dramatic Irony in Your Writing http://t.co/KsQzNEsboc @JulieEshbaugh


How Can Bookstores Survive? | Savvy Writers & e-Books online:  http://t.co/jgZI2wDzaw


Connecting Subplots with Each Other and the Main Story Arc: http://t.co/1cv4BpfGVl @vgrefer


A free directory of cover designers, formatters, freelance editors, and more: http://t.co/E2upLeKgPR


How 1 Famous Author Tricks Herself Into Writing Wonderful Stories http://t.co/ir9tdaIdaQ @thewritelife


Why 1 Writer No Longer Uses Profanity in His Books: http://t.co/GXi2N2t2gu @rchazzchute


An Important Tool to Make You a More Productive Writer: http://t.co/yJsw2NS4KD @DIYMFA


Evaluating Whether You’re Really Ready to Self-Publish http://t.co/HMC96qE50X @JordanMcCollum


Guidelines of Good Online Behavior: http://t.co/5P9uBbSTYR @EdieMelson


But Can’t I Send My Best Pages? http://t.co/knb3N5eAnD @ava_jae


7 Things You Can Do to Promote Your Book As Soon As You Finish the First Draft: http://t.co/lwl9C7rXk7 @sandrabeckwith


Does digital publishing mean the death of the author? http://t.co/J5XvHqbUVf @guardianbooks @richardlea


Are You Creating Your Own Personal Cliches? http://t.co/LzgPW0yl8t @KMWeiland


How To Turn Real Life Into Bestselling Fiction:  http://t.co/sNfbuESSoA @RuthHarrisBooks @RomanceUniv


Myst. Lov. Kitchen: The ‘Lucy Burdette’ Daiquiri, Courtesy of @SusanMacNeal http://t.co/RJYkmRC9CJ @CleoCoyle


What Works, What Doesn’t In Book Marketing:  http://t.co/1vt8iOp5t0 @badredheadmedia


6 Degrees of Agent Evolution |  http://t.co/M2itUdGmKT @digibookworld


Horror–Screenwriting: How Found Footage was Murdered : http://t.co/MYRnosRWec @yomyomf


The Great Free Book Debate: Authors Weigh In:  http://t.co/fclbaqc0KX @libraryoferana @mythicscribes


How a love of tabletop D&D helps video game designers tell their stories: http://t.co/CaVHJceMv0 @ColinCampbellx @Polygon


Small presses growing translated fiction’s readership: http://t.co/ggiKbprzwu @badaude @guardianbooks


3 Questions Your Professional Writing Bio Must Answer http://t.co/sJH1CtGRzh @writersrelief


Myth: to be good, writing must be hard | http://t.co/1u3BCch2Pn @deanwesleysmith


Leaving a Literary Legacy: Who Will Watch Over Your Work? http://t.co/NfKBUWFIId @annbauerwriter


5 Things Readers Want from Novelists on Social Media: http://t.co/tpeLtwBTvh @kcraftwriter


Tips for writing better endings:  http://t.co/4Jv7MbzqTY @io9


How to Use Coincidence in Stories:  http://t.co/2kNSWgGoyy @shalvatzis


Tips for new writers on getting started writing a book:  http://t.co/VrQ1wgT3A5


Crime Fiction: A Modern-Day Look at ‘The Hound of the Baskervilles’:  http://t.co/pKsyMwp5nV @kbowenwriter


Guide to Targeting an Audience http://t.co/D2ynOvjMvQ @mariamurnane


An agent on authors who worry their ideas will be stolen:  http://t.co/tfv8bNNel7 @Janet_Reid


Questions to answer when creating a mythology for your world:  http://t.co/gEM5iCjsp1 @rfwriters


Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Maple Cheese Scones http://t.co/T3DJcyd397 @CleoCoyle


Tools for Writing More http://t.co/Nd8VsB1R72 @SusanKayeQuinn


Creating Fully Developed Characters–writers weigh in:  http://t.co/aIswHDEexB @WriterDiaries


How to Sell More of Your Fiction Without Selling Your Soul:  http://t.co/pjeTG1z3V5 @storyrally


Writers Unplugged: Going Underground, for Productivity’s Sake http://t.co/RBvUcQ3fZK @GlimmerGuy    5 SF Convention Misconceptions: http://t.co/Syx9JmDIQj @petersnede


5 tips for a good narrative essay:  http://t.co/8wLVhjZhWR @busyguru


5 Lies That Keep Us from Becoming Great Writers:  http://t.co/o5UPf3OQMc @JoelRunyon


3 Things Authors Should Do Before Attending a Book Fair or Writers Conference: http://t.co/VyMQeaNZfO @Coach2Publish


Write First. Edit Later:  http://t.co/TdVcEwgn6s @ErinMFeldman


Contract Basics: Subsidiary Rights http://t.co/dheznen44o @AriaGlazki


5 Tips for World Building in Speculative Flash Fiction:  http://t.co/B5XcWMuGy2 @EDFsChronicles


Write What You DonÂ’t Know: http://t.co/HIdAHZtZuQ @litreactor


The Future of Publishing–Profit-Sharing Authors?:  http://t.co/ruXYSTaDZ0 @IanKEllard @Porter_Anderson


5 Screenwriters That Ended Up Hating Their Own Movies http://t.co/ty21sEOU78 @WritingLeeman


12 Resolutions for a Writer:  http://t.co/O6iqDCxkjX @LitRejections


Querying a book that already has interest from a publisher http://t.co/8KfSArBQ5i @Janet_Reid


12 Tips to Inspire Your Writing http://t.co/nRuWUKBJ3f @BlaskovicWriter


Why 1 Writer Has Failed To Write a Word in 2014: http://t.co/3M7efFM5Tp  @aaronmritchey @RMFWriters    How Journalism Created a Writer:  http://t.co/N3Vnfgnlw7 @johnweeast


What’s hard about self-pub? Authors weigh in:  http://t.co/jZO35j1hvb @thecreativepenn @Porter_Anderson @ByRozMorris @MirabilisDave


Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Frito Shepherd’s Pie and Super Bowl Boulevard from Cleo Coyle #glutenfree recipe http://t.co/xumBQsyx1I @CleoCoyle


The 15 Best Twitter Lists for Writers http://t.co/Fn7Y6yWvRK @thewritelife


How Art Can Save Your Soul | fcmalby http://t.co/GbnScMllCB @FCMalby


13 Secrets for Sizzling Dialogue http://t.co/2flwghiH61 @RayneHall


Tips for Holding a Writing Workshop http://t.co/hfQVbr92pb @emilyjeanroche


Plotting v. Pantsing: Is One Superior Over the Other? http://t.co/GObOo1Us2V @jeanniecampbell


Persistence, And The Long Con Of Being A Successful Writer « terribleminds: chuck wendig http://t.co/KnHTPy2Bwl @KameronHurley


A Self-Pub Journey: Sales and Marketing Break Down http://t.co/icitqGxiXT @Aimeelsalter


8 Ways to Handle Rejection. http://t.co/PGf9GOK3Jt @WritersBistro


Authors deserve better :  http://t.co/MS0lTtPGSV @barryeisler


A Prediction on Book Visibility in 2014 | Savvy Writers & e-Books online http://t.co/YrdAjsWmky @JAKonrath


Stress less and daydream more: a writer’s resolution http://t.co/Z7Nzcfiaja @jodimeadows


How Much Do Writers Earn? Less Than You Think:  http://t.co/P7myVB9l7y @pubperspectives


Narrative Setting: How To Build A World http://t.co/xBJKXV8oQm @woodwardkaren


1 Writer’s Process for Approaching Large Revisions:  http://t.co/xb9OboeMQw


Understanding Patterns of Change in Fiction and Memoir: http://t.co/wphruFMr4O @writeabook {corr’d link}


6 Of The Best Pieces of Advice From Successful Writers: http://t.co/gHUPajrQQ5 @BelleBethCooper


JA Konrath responds to industry expert Mike Shatzkin’s recent analysis on the future of publishing:  http://t.co/jgWPZI6M64 @MikeShatzkin


Realistic fictional settings in crime fiction: http://t.co/fxhsGqZGLQ @mkinberg


Why Don’t More People Buy Your Book? http://t.co/X3Syb3LLa1 @LyndaRYoung


The Art of Writing Copy http://t.co/IpxOoUdFDP @sjaejones


Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Orange Chicken http://t.co/LYOBPnO0Ey @CleoCoyle


A writer’s concerns about using 99 Designs: http://t.co/wNqKwzmP1T @lkblackburne


9 Keys to Creating an Effective Writing Accountability Group http://t.co/XkRRl875FQ @bigstatebiglife


Hard truths about self-publishing:  http://t.co/zaPA3KBQyB @NazareaAndrews


Why authors and trad pub don’t reveal authors’ earnings http://t.co/N1TtVbDLwM @LexiRevellian


NA Alley: 5 Tips for Writing Love Scenes http://t.co/6iBM0d0aW2


Twitter Rewards Spamming Indie Authors with Trending Terms http://t.co/mgbucVrlB3 @Goodereadermike @Goodereader


10 Writing Tips From Ernest Hemingway:  http://t.co/s3EtGSsSaw @boyinthehat


How to get your indie-book in book stores:  http://t.co/zHDYeCnDSZ @tamzwrite


Can men write good heroines?  http://t.co/yzEmZ7dKYw @SamanthaEllis27 @guardianbooks


Another Twist on Marketing your Book http://t.co/Xx36foo9xM @CarsonCanada


3 tips for writing watertight fantasy, science fiction and time travel stories: http://t.co/Ls3vwIrMC4 @nailyournovel


S Africans slow to adopt e-books:  http://t.co/Gmobbnz1DH @techcentral


All the links I shared last week: http://t.co/lKuTGh1jo6 . All the links I’ve ever shared (searchable): http://t.co/tjn3OfwnLH .


Writing Filters to Use: The Finer Details Filters:  http://t.co/7HTZnZyxFd @Awesome_Dawn


How to Decide Which Story to Write First:  http://t.co/n0xbkau3kC @cantrelljason


50 Attributes of a Great Copywriter: http://t.co/duVpiLaRkl @jeffbullas


Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Steamed Comfort Eggs from Ovidia Yu http://t.co/ZhyuwLpPsY @CleoCoyle


The Formative Event Technique Raises Your Story’s Stakes: http://t.co/XSQu9DKJUE @marilynhorowitz


On Becoming a (Self) Publisher: (Lessons Learned):  http://t.co/elceTiIugI @NickRuffilo @pubperspectives


Yes, Shakespeare used flashbacks and multiple storylines: http://t.co/1LYrIak8ya @AronsonLinda


Roadblocks and Why 1 Writer Prefers Blogging to Writing Her Book: http://t.co/AV925M9ICD


Make Your Story Richer with In-depth Knowledge of Your Characters: http://ow.ly/sXQhv @ReeseRyanWrites


7 Things 1 Writer Has Given Up To Write and Read More:  http://ow.ly/sXQ0U @jamietr


Why 1 Writer Won’t Read ‘How To’ Screenwriting Articles Anymore: http://ow.ly/sXPS4 @clivefrayne @scriptmag


Reviewing Your Year’s Writing Goals Encourages Your Creative Spirit http://ow.ly/sXQsF @writeabook


To Outline or Not to Outline? A New Way of Looking at the Debate: http://ow.ly/sXQbZ @jessicastrawser @writersdigest


Killing the Top Ten Sacred Cows of Publishing: Killing a Career | http://ow.ly/sXQ6k @deanwesleysmith


The Top 5 Things 1 Writer Learned from an Editor:  http://ow.ly/sXQlp @DonnaGalanti


10 Things 1 Writer Has Learned 4 Months After Publishing Her 1st Novel http://ow.ly/sXPKy @womenonwriting


A Writer Considers the Future of Self-Pub:  http://ow.ly/sXQ9H @BlakeBooks


How to Set Up Google Authorship (and Why You Really Should) http://ow.ly/sXQ4o @nickdaws


6 Ways Micro-Publishing Strengthens Your Career:  http://ow.ly/sXQA3 @writermama


45 ways to avoid using the word ‘very’:  http://ow.ly/sXQDl @writers_write


5 Mistakes Killing Self-Published Authors:  http://ow.ly/sXQdS @kristenlambtx


It’s Not Just One Book. Your Rights And How To Exploit Them: http://ow.ly/sZ91I @thecreativepenn


How To Make Life Easy For Librarians So Your Book Gets In Libraries http://ow.ly/sZ9hZ @uriel1998


Cleaning Up Your Manuscript Can Save You Money http://ow.ly/sZ9wU @CKmacleodwriter


How to Feel Confident Sharing Your Creative Work In Public http://ow.ly/sYSUa @LeRegalla


The Secret To Succeeding As A Writer: Having A Criterion For Success http://ow.ly/sYSeW @woodwardkaren


Top Tips to Make Best Use of A Blog Tour:  http://ow.ly/sZa7w @cupgrease


Is There a Right Age to Read a Book?  http://ow.ly/sYSNQ @tordotcom


In Britain and especially abroad, ebooks are booming:  http://ow.ly/sYSun @guardianbooks


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January 30, 2014

Tax Time Revelations and…Is Writing is the Career We Can’t Retire From?

By Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraigfile2081241837401


I had my appointment with my CPA on Wednesday.  The appointment was in the middle of the Southern snowstorm aftermath, actually—there’s nothing like adding to the misery of taxes with a minor natural disaster, you know.  I hired a CPA last year when I continued waking up in cold sweats in the middle of the night, worrying that I was doing my taxes wrong.  I didn’t think I’d fit in well in tax jail.  I decided I didn’t mind paying for peace of mind.


She had me painstakingly pick through my bank account and pull out every deposit from all sources…self-publishing and traditional publishing…for 2013.  This was nightmarish and took the better part of an hour.  But I didn’t have the 1099 from Amazon yet and she wanted to double-check all my income sources anyway, so I combed through the statements.  The entries I was looking for were direct deposits and checks from Penguin (via my agent), Llewellyn (my agent doesn’t represent me with this publisher), Amazon, ACX, Smashwords, Apple, CreateSpace, and Barnes & Noble.


The amazing revelation I made was that my total income for 2013 was 68% self-publishing income.  That’s with a total of 8 traditionally published books and 5 self-published books currently on the shelves (1 trad. published book is in production and 1 self-published book is in production).


Overall profits increased by 66.6% for 2013.  I tried to figure out what I was doing right so that I could replicate it.  But all I’ve done online is what I’ve been doing for ages…I blog here.  I tweet. I Google Plus.  I sometimes Facebook.  I rarely pitch my books.  What had changed in 2013: all my self-published books released in print. All my self-published books released in audio.  I had three traditionally-published releases (although, as I mentioned, the traditionally-published income was a small fraction of my total) and one self-published release.  I did a couple of Goodreads giveaways.


My accountant asked about my advertising expenses for my small business, since I wrote off $100 in 2012 for print copies of my traditionally published books for giveaways, conferences, charity basket auctions, that kind of thing.  No–I spent $0 for advertising in 2013.  I blushed a little when she asked me that question.  What kind of a small business owner am I?  But I seem to make more when I just focus on the writing stuff.


One big thing help was that foreign sales picked up dramatically last year. My foreign sales figures had been lackluster for over a year and a half.  From 2011 until early last year, I never even clicked on foreign sales on the KDP page.   In 2013, I saw a dramatic upswing…mainly in the UK, but also Denmark and Australia (other foreign sales were just odds and ends here and there).  I did nothing to make those sales happen.  I guess my visibility increased on Amazon US to the point where it just trickled through to the other markets. I really have no explanation for it.


Actually, I do have one explanation for it.  I’m starting to saturate my corner of the market a little bit.  I’ve given my content more reach by putting it in more formats.  And I’m writing 3-4 books a year.  I think I’ve got readers engaged with me—an amazing feat, considering I don’t actually interact with readers on any of my social media platforms…well, with the exception of my Riley Adams Facebook page.  I’m getting many more emails and Facebook direct messages from readers than I ever received in the past.


What engages my readers are my books.  And that’s the way I want it.  They’re not very interested in me.  A good thing, because I’m not particularly interesting.  My sister joked with me one day and asked if readers were calling themselves “my number one fan.”  (Stephen King reference there.)  And I told her, no, not at all.  Although several have written to me saying they’re Myrtle Clover’s #1 fan (protagonist in one series).  And that’s exactly the way I want it.


But to sustain this book-centric reader engagement, I have to keep writing books.  Which brings me to my next point—is writing a career that’s difficult to retire from? To keep our income stream constant, is the necessary visibility and discoverability dependent on regular book publication?


I think it might be. And right now, that’s absolutely fine with me.  I love writing books.  I’m all about books.  But people I know frequently ask me if I might burn out at the pace I’m going.  I say no—but there are days when I’ve got to recharge.  Fortunately, there are enough writing-related tasks to switch to something else productive and allow myself to recharge a little.  So I’ll contact my book cover designer or I’ll edit my outline or I’ll write a blog post or schedule updates on Twitter.


But…sure.  When I think of keeping this career going and keeping my readers engaged and I think of the decades in the future—it can be overwhelming.  In some ways, though, it’s a relief to me to think that my platform, which is a writer-centric platform, isn’t what’s connecting me to readers.  I’m sure it’s not.  My blog and Twitter and Google + have given me a higher visibility among writers, but readers aren’t finding me that way.  They’re finding me through my books.


When I think of all my favorite authors…many of them (aside from some of the now-deceased Golden Age mystery writers) continue to be favorites because they regularly publish.  That’s how they stay on my radar.  Each year there’s an Elizabeth George book out or a Louise Penny book out or an M.C. Beaton.  That’s what’s keeping me hooked… regularly released solid reads.


So those are my thoughts, just from my own data.  What do you think, though?  How do you feel readers are discovering your books, or how do you discover books as a reader?  What keeps your favorite writers on your radar, as a reader?  How can writers sustain visibility and income levels, moving forward?


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January 28, 2014

A Modern-Day Look at “The Hound of the Baskervilles”

by Kathy Owen, @kbowenwriter


Elizabeth invited me to share with you one of my favorite classic detective novels, Sir Arthur Conan Doyle’s The Hound of the Baskervilles.  I love talking about the classics with fellow mystery lovers!


The Hound of the Baskervilles (1901-02) has been regarded by current and contemporary Sherlockians as the best of the four novels.  Since its publication, it has been adapted dozens of times for radio, film, and television.


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Holmes and Watson. Artist Sidney Paget, 1901. Wikimedia Commons.


Hound beginnings:


The year 1901 marked the death of Queen Victoria and saw Doyle well-established in his career: he had achieved many of his personal goals, and was considered a serious writer and popular public speaker.  That year, Doyle went on a golfing holiday in Norfolk with his friend Fletcher Robinson.  On a dreary, rainy day, when golfing was out of the question, Robinson passed the time by recounting to Doyle the West Country legend of a spectral hound, which gave Doyle the idea for his story.  Blogger and writer Gene Lempp wrote a fascinating post on the Legend of Black Shuck which gives more detail.


Doyle subsequently traveled to the Dartmoor area to get local color for the story, which was originally not intended to feature Holmes (he had already killed off Holmes in “The Final Problem” – pitching him over the Reichenbach Falls with Professor Moriarty).  According to Doyle, Holmes sort of worked his way into the story; so, rather than resurrect Holmes (although he did later, in 1903), Doyle made the story a reminiscence by Watson of an earlier undocumented case.


The Hound of the Baskervilles was serialized in The Strand Magazine (where most of the stories were serialized) over a nine-month period, from August 1901 to April 1902.  It was eagerly received, and long lines formed at the publisher’s office when the next installment was due out.


Broadsheet advertisement for The Hound of the Baskervilles, 1901. Wikimedia Commons.

Broadsheet advertisement for The Hound of the Baskervilles, 1901. Wikimedia Commons.


There’s a lot to admire about the novel, but I’ll keep to a few interesting aspects.


 


Narrative strategies in Hound:


Doyle was master of the cliff-hanger.  He knew how to break up the segments to keep the readers hooked.  The first magazine installment, for example, ends with Watson’s sleep being disturbed by: “the sob of a woman, the muffled, strangling gasp of one who is torn by uncontrollable sorrow.”  Other cliff-hangers involve a dead body, a stealthy stranger, and mysterious noises in the night.


Watson lying in wait for the mysterious stranger. Artist Sidney Paget, 1901. Wikimedia Commons.

Watson lying in wait for the mysterious stranger. Artist Sidney Paget, 1901. Wikimedia Commons.


In Hound, Doyle was able to resolve the narrative difficulty he’d had in two earlier full-length Holmes novels:  how to explain the complex and lengthy series of events that lead up to a crime without the use of long flashbacks or tedious explanations that interrupt the story.  Instead, Doyle used different narrative voices: those of the client, a 17th century manuscript, Watson, and Holmes, who later relays his own account of the time when he and Watson are working the case separately.


The separation of the Holmes/Watson team is unusual as well.  Without Holmes on the scene to guide him, Watson has his chance in the limelight as a detective.  It is a role that weighs heavily on him, however.  The reader shares the feeling of vulnerability in Holmes’s absence.


 


Gothic elements:


Artist Sidney Paget’s otherworldly hound. Image via wikimedia commons.

Artist Sidney Paget’s otherworldly hound. Image via wikimedia commons.


The novel’s Gothic horror story trappings  make it an unusual setting for a detective story:  a family curse, a dark, primitive moor, a seemingly-supernatural hound, a black-hearted villain.  There are lots of “thrills and chills.”  But it’s a detective story through and through, because the Gothic is not its solution.  There is a rational explanation for everything.  Some scholars posit this is why Doyle instinctively felt that Holmes belonged in the story.


 


Psychoanalytic facets of the novel:


During the time that Doyle was writing the Holmes stories, Freud was developing his theories of the unconscious mind and repression.  Writers such as Conrad, Stevenson and James wrote symbolic stories in which the source of evil existed within the mad soul and had to be restrained by the intellect.  The Hound of the Baskervilles treats the problem of human evil from a psychological perspective rather than a metaphysical/ supernatural one.  Scholars like to read the wild, lonely, treacherous moors as symbolic of the repressed unknown unconscious mind, uncivilized and barbaric.  Using this interpretation, the moor would act in conjunction with characters in the story (including the neolithic savages, the original inhabitants of the moor) to depict the unconscious, dark side of the human soul, or the primitive part of man existing beneath the civilized veneer, if you will.


 


There’s more I could say about this (we haven’t even touched Jungian theory), but we want stuff to discuss in the comments section!  I hope you’ll give The Hound of the Baskervilles a second (or first) look.


 


Bio:


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K.B. Owen taught college English at universities in Connecticut and Washington, DC and holds a doctorate in 19th century British literature.  A long-time mystery lover, she drew upon her teaching experiences in creating the Professor Concordia Wells mystery series.  The first book, Dangerous and Unseemly, was published in early 2013.


The second book, Unseemly Pursuits: A Concordia Wells Mystery, has just been released:


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 A deadly secret that won’t stay buried…


It is the fall of 1896, and Miss Concordia Wells is hip-deep in the usual tumult of a lady professor’s life: classes, clubs, student pranks, and the unending drama generated by the girls she lives with on campus.  Complicating this normality is the new Lady Principal, whom the students have nicknamed “the Ogre.”  The woman seems bent on making Concordia’s life miserable.


And then there’s the exotic spirit medium, Madame Durand, who has befriended Concordia’s mother and has started a “Spirit Club” on campus.  Madame’s prognostications of doom are at first only mildly irritating – until events take a sobering turn.  An ancient Egyptian amulet donated to the college mysteriously disappears, the donor is found murdered, and his daughter – Concordia’s best friend – confesses to killing him.


Desperate for answers, Concordia unravels a 20-year-old secret, closely guarded by men now dead.  But such secrets can be dangerous for the daughters left behind, including Concordia herself.  Can she make sense of the mystery that has bound together their fates, before it’s too late?


 


Unseemly Pursuits is available through these venues:


Kindle


Nook 


Smashwords 


Kobo


iBooks 


 


Kathy’s also hosting a giveaway!  A randomly-selected winner from the comments section of each guest post on her blog tour (comments up through March 6, 2014) will receive a free e-copy of Unseemly Pursuits.  One grand-prize winner from all of the ebook winners will receive an Unseemly Pursuits swag kit!  This includes a mug, JellyBelly tin, keychain, and two signed paperbacks: her first novel in the series, Dangerous and Unseemly, along with Unseemly Pursuits.  (If the grand-prize winner lives outside the U.S., she or he will receive a $50 Amazon gift card instead, because of the cost of shipping).


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January 26, 2014

My Process for Approaching Large Revisions

By Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig


sw_Editing_N10_20130809_230442 (1)I received an email last week from a writer who is feeling a little overwhelmed by the revision process and asked if I’d written any posts that helped to sort of sort through revision in an organized way.


And my first reaction was, besides completely understanding why anyone would feel overwhelmed, was: “Oh sure, I’ve got gobs of blog posts like that.”  But…no.  Although I talk a lot about my need for revision and stuff I’ve had to fix in the past, and the fact that I don’t edit while I draft–I had no posts at all about how I organize and approach revision.  So I’ll correct that now.  And, looking at my process below, I’m thinking that one reason I might not have outlined this before is because it so closely resembles my process for writing a book that maybe I thought I’d repeat myself.


This is a process for someone who really, really needs a process or has become frozen because there is so much to do and she doesn’t know where to start.  It could work for someone with really limited time and a demanding day job.  Or someone who has tried other methods without success.


First off:


Brainstorm a list for your revision.


This may be a humdinger of a list, but work on it a little every day. Maybe you already have a list of notes to yourself about manuscript problems…this is a good time to organize the bits into a master list.


Everything goes on the list.  The stuff you worried about in your book.  The feedback you got from your editor/beta reader/critique group.  It’s a master list.


Brainstorm all the global problems you recognize in your book. You might know immediately what these are. If you can’t put your finger on them, think about lack of conflict, whether the protagonist is taking charge or observing, character development, character growth, flat dialogue, and character goals/motivation.


Brainstorm all the smaller mistakes you want to watch for.  Be thinking about things like: repeated words (echoes), continuity errors (character’s hair color/outfit changes in same scene), POV problems, pacing (some scenes too rushed? some scenes too slow?) too many adjectives or adverbs, dialogue tag issues, varied sentence structure, bumpy scene transitions, etc.  Weak word choice–sometimes I’ll double-check that I’ve used words like felt, very, look, started to, think, really, put in a smart way.


Brainstorm all the additions you want to make to the manuscript.  These might be chapter breaks, descriptions, setting description, added scenes that add conflict or develop character, etc.


Brainstorm all the deletions you know you want to make to the manuscript.  These might be instances of backstory, dull dialogue, or meandering scenes that don’t further the story.


Then: break headings on your list into smaller tasks of things to do/address.  See how many tasks you can break each area down into.  So maybe you received some beta reader/editor/crit group feedback: Help make main character more sympathetic and likeable.  You could change that to add in a pet-the-dog/save the cat moment near book’s beginning.


Martin seems too flat as a character could have a few to-dos:  Brainstorm Martin’s backstory and what he fears most/wants most.   List why Martin is important to the protagonist and ways to make him more soHow does Martin grow during the story?


Some of these things are going to take only a few minutes (word searches for frequently repeated words or potential problem words).  Some will take longer (continuity errors, POV, etc.).  If you’ve broken down some of your bigger tasks into much smaller, manageable to-dos, though, you’ll have bits you can accomplish even in small amounts of time.


After you finish with your list, work on it as you have time.  If you’re forgetful like I am, carefully mark off each item when you’ve finished. Mark on your document where you left off, if you’re working on a read-through. I use Word’s Track Changes or Comments feature.


Continuity errors seem to take the longest amount of time for me to catch because I usually have to jot down notes about what day of the week the story is on, a character’s eye color (can prevent this if I make a style sheet as I write the book!), etc.  Read through the book for continuity errors (notepad beside us),  POV, and transition problems.


If you come across additional problems as you go, add them to your to-do list, also breaking them down into smaller tasks.


Double-check yourself.  Check your list again.


Do a final read-through to make sure all your deletions, additions, and word changes make sense.


Call yourself done and reward yourself somehow.  Maybe by starting on that next book that was tempting you the whole time you were plodding through your revision?


I’ll add here that now, although I still do need a list to help me keep track of changes I need to make, I don’t *have* to make one as extensive as the one above…now it’s more rote because I’ve done it so many times.  This is more if you have a heckuva revision on your hands, feel overwhelmed, or need to apply some real organization to your project to help stay on track and motivated.


There are so  many ways to approach a big revision.  What are some of your tips?


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January 25, 2014

Twitterific Writing Links

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig


Twitterific links are fed into the Writer’s Knowledge Base search engine(developed by Blogwriter and software engineer Mike Fleming) which has over 23,000 free articles on writing related topics. It’s the search engine for writers.


Have a great week!


The Two Main Characters – A Writer’s Worksheet: http://dld.bz/dfKNE @amandaonwriting


5 Ways Authors Can Recycle Their Discarded Material: http://ow.ly/sJaFZ @vgrefer


Sing with Your Inner Voice (& Write It All Down). ~ Caroline Brown http://ow.ly/sJaYV @elephantjournal


Fiction writing: When you might want to use passive construction | Into Another World http://ow.ly/sJb3d


Sarcasm in narration: http://dld.bz/dfKK5 @rfwriters


7 Ways to Overcome Writer’s Block: http://dld.bz/dfQta @KenneyMyers


First Be a Storyteller: http://dld.bz/dfKN3 @jamesscottbell


Writers Are People That Stop And Start:  http://ow.ly/sJbe6 @thoughtcatalog


Blood-Red Pencil: Audio Editing http://ow.ly/sJbh7 @authorterryo


Foundations of fantasy–Beowulf: http://dld.bz/dfKK9 @RyanHowse


To kickstart inspiration: a plot bank with over 2300 entries: http://dld.bz/dfKKu


Tips for Better Blog Posts for Writers:  http://ow.ly/sJbjX @CaballoFrances


When studying your character, don’t think about heroism or gender…think about fear:  http://dld.bz/dfKNk @bang2write


Tips for better dialogue: http://dld.bz/dfKMP @rfwriters


Finding your readers online: Award-winning authors speak up: http://dld.bz/dfKJ4 @jimhbs


Writers, we are doing it backwards: http://dld.bz/df8EZ @speechwriterguy


Inspiration and motivation from a slaughterhouse: http://dld.bz/dfV85 @Screenwriter12


Self-Published Authors should always own their own set of ISBNs:  http://ow.ly/sL8DA @oceanviewpress


Launch etiquette–must you buy the book? http://dld.bz/dfTUS @KerryGans


Free Research and Development for Authors http://ow.ly/sJbnz @byondpapr


Getting published–a flowchart: http://dld.bz/dfTVb @rfwriters


How Much Can Hybrid Authors Make? http://bit.ly/1eJ1JPJ @steenaholmes


Historical fiction: 10 Rules for Rewriting History http://ow.ly/sJbIw @writerunboxed


An ergonomic tip for writers: http://dld.bz/dfQtt @MartinaABoone


How to use lists to write: http://ow.ly/sJbQc @MSaintGermain


Fantasy Flash Fiction–5 Common Mistakes :  http://ow.ly/sJc9c @FaithBoughan


12 Tips To Improve Your Writing In A Hurry:  http://ow.ly/sJcfe @AnneWayman


How to Successfully Kill a Character: The Checklist:  http://dld.bz/dfTVq @KMWeiland


The Power of Polarizing Through Your Writing: http://dld.bz/dfV8c @menwithpens


Combat in fantasy–10 tips: http://dld.bz/de75M @fantasy_faction


Don’t Start Something New in 2014 (Finish Something Old): http://dld.bz/dfTWC @Jordanrosenfeld


10 tips for writing romance: http://dld.bz/dfTUX @amberrisme


10 Authors Who Wrote for the Silver Screen: http://ow.ly/sJcAk @pastemagazine


18 Signs You’re A Writer At Heart:  http://ow.ly/sJcnQ @thoughtcatalog


Should you self-publish? 6 key questions:  http://ow.ly/sJcCh @MSaintGermain


Tips on How to Read Your Novel:  http://ow.ly/sJcEa @MSaintGermain


5 Things Writing Has Taught 1 Writer About Love: http://ow.ly/sJcki @AlwaysIncluded


How 1 Writer Plans to Write His Best Screenplay Ever: Make His 1st Feature Film: http://ow.ly/sL6Ut @bartondeepwood @nofilmschool


How 1 Writer Plans to Write His Best Screenplay Ever: Make His 1st Feature Film: http://ow.ly/sL6Ut @bartondeepwood @nofilmschool


How 1 Writer Plans to Write His Best Screenplay Ever: Make His 1st Feature Film: http://ow.ly/sL6Ut @bartondeepwood @nofilmschool


Characteristics of the ‘Bad Guy’ Antagonist: http://dld.bz/df8De @rfwriters


How authors can reclaim the rights to their back catalog titles http://ow.ly/sJvOs @Bookbaby


5 Things YA Parents Say (But 1 Writer’s Parents Never Did): http://dld.bz/dfKNv @EmilyCaseysMuse


How to speak publisher: F is for Foreign rights: http://dld.bz/df2dM @annerooney


I have sucked. I currently suck. I will suck. (Or the life of a writer): http://dld.bz/df2d2 @rebeccaberto


Goodreads’ live or die decision to be purchased by Amazon: http://ow.ly/sJw0V @michaelwhite1


Tips for writing something you’ve never experienced: http://dld.bz/df8At @rfwriters


Self editing basics: http://dld.bz/dfDmb @rebeccatdickson


Twitter etiquette: http://bit.ly/1eUlVQZ @jemifraser


Overused Words To Avoid: http://dld.bz/df8AZ @thewritermama


Vulnerable Characters: http://dld.bz/dfG7v @JeanOram


Finding New Readers with a Multi-Author Ebook Bundle: http://bit.ly/1diyxfZ @goblinwriter


The awkward art of book trailers: http://nyr.kr/J8FxEy @rachelarons @pageturner


Plot structure–wow moments: http://bit.ly/1bgfTt1 @camillelaguire


Old methods of reader discoverability–and why they no longer work: http://bit.ly/1mmauVA @kristinerusch


A Beat Sheet For Scrivener: http://bit.ly/1dGCr6V    @woodwardkaren


Why Everyone Should Read More Science Fiction: http://huff.to/1bt4Ye3 @huffpost


Putting the Weird in Weird Western: http://dld.bz/dfV8u @gemmafiles @qqwill


Stop being embarrassed about fan fiction: http://bit.ly/1fJRH6d @dailydot


8 tips for better keynote addresses: http://bit.ly/1ceR9Te @paulsloane


How to set writing goals for 2014: http://bit.ly/1gYaVVp @LeahMcClellan


The 10 Biggest Mistakes People Make in Setting Goals: http://bit.ly/1e6pkK1 @michaelhyatt


How to develop your writer’s voice: http://bit.ly/1afAE9Z @writeabook


An agent’s opinion of self-publishing: http://bit.ly/1azH3u4 @Janet_Reid


Thoughts on pacing stories: http://bit.ly/1afBi7p @TiffanyReisz


How to make your romance novel feel real: http://dld.bz/dfDmA @nownovel


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January 23, 2014

Does Mind Mapping Hurt?

by Delia Brendan, @deliabrendan


delia brendan undercoverYears ago, I went to a plotting workshop. The workshop leader described a process involving white poster board and multi-colored sticky notes. She described how each sticky note color corresponded to various plot elements. At the end of the exercise, she showed the group a completed plot map and explained how this process could help you from getting bogged down during drafting.


As a visual person, I loved the concept of working from a map. So, I dutifully went out and bought white poster board and enough sticky notes to outfit a corporation. As an organizationally-challenged over thinker, I was soon mired down in details. Was Dr. Venom’s mother from Siberia a blue sticky note because she was related to a bad guy or a green sticky note because she befriends the heroine? No surprise, I never wound up with a plot map and I’m still pulling sticky notes out of sock drawers and couch cushions. 


If I could get my information organized in virtual notebooks, was a free tool that would help me organize my plot too much to hope for?


It turns out it’s not. Now, when I say “mind mapping,” I need you to take a deep breath. It’s a terrible name as it conjures images of being strapped in a chair as electrodes are attached to your temples. It’s not something that one might think would help creativity, but it is invaluable.


“Mind mapping” is not new. It’s just a description of how to organize your thoughts. In terms of the software, a map is nothing more than that huge piece of white poster board we lugged home from the office supply store. Topics and subtopics are the sticky notes.


Let’s look at this in action with the story of Sleeping Beauty. As you dig back in your Disney brain, recall that the story opens with the birth of the King and Queen’s daughter. An evil fairy casts a spell on the child that when a spindle pricks her she’ll die. A good fairy can’t remove the curse, but she alters it. Instead of dying, the princess will fall into a 100-year sleep and be awoken by the kiss of a prince. Fifteen years later, the princess accidentally triggers the curse.


MindMap


The name of the story is our starting points, my first two topics are the key events: the curse and triggering the curse.


The activities that follow each of those events are subtopics. There’s no right or wrong way to create a map. You start from the point that makes sense to you.


Depending on the software, you can customize the map. If you enjoyed the sticky notes colors, rest assured you can color your topics. Even better, you can change Dr. Venom’s mother from a blue to a green without having to find where you put the green sticky notes. Topics can be rearranged by clicking and dragging. You can also order items across branches with markers or create relationships as you build a chapter structure.


When I was writing the first Matchmaker Pearl romantic mystery, Undercover (2013), I appreciated the ability to open and close branches on the map until I needed them. It helped avoid being overwhelmed by an intricate and complex plot structure.


So, what application should you use? The answer is the one you like. What makes complete sense for me may not for you. You’ll need to try a couple to find the best fit.


Here are a few products to get you started:



XMind—(Windows/Mac) Xmind is very popular. I was amazed at how came in the free version. It’s an application, so you need to spend a few minutes to understand how it works. It is very right-click oriented as you add topics and subtopics.
MindJet Maps—(Windows/Mac/iPad) MindJet is aimed at a professional audience and the computer version price reflects that. However, I discovered that the iPad version is free. That is great news because the iPad app is terrific. It has a streamlined interface, easy to understand, and the tutorial is very helpful without being invasive. You can either save maps to defined storage areas, like Dropbox or Box.com, or email them as PDFs or mind map files.


Coogle—(Web) Coogle is a basic free web application. You can sign in with either Google or Facebook credentials. It has a very clean web interface and can handle basic mapping. This is may be a good place to start, but I’m concerned that this product may be too limited if you have a complex plot.

Before diving in, I have two pieces of advice. First, whenever you’re downloading software make sure to take a few minutes and look at the licensing agreement. It’s not breathtaking reading, but it’s important to understand the parameters and what they do with your data. Second, spend a few minutes with the tutorials. Each product has it’s own nuances and this will save you time.


db_photo2Delia Brendan was born and raised in Washington state. She graduated from the University of Southern Mississippi with the kind of doctorate that you don’t want when you’re bleeding or trying to determine if that lump “means something.” Her careers have always involved writing, be it technical writing, legal writing, or just your average system down messages. 


A chance meeting of Pearl Waterman in 2012 brought a desire to share her adventures and explain what really happens in Dandelion. She is married to writer Sean Brendan Brown and they live in Olympia with a very gray, fat little beagle named Katie.


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January 21, 2014

Reasons and Methods of Killing Characters—And One Reason Not To

By Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig


There’s an interesting phenomenon when you comb through your RSS reader—even if you have a large number of blogs that you’re following.  Sometimes it’s as if everyone got an idea for a particular blog post at the same time.  This is natural when you’re talking about posts on a topical issue (publishing news) but a little eerie when it happens spontaneously, with nothing prompting it.Dagger


So I recently came across and shared or scheduled for sharing, four different posts in a week’s time, that either linked to material on the same topic, or posted on that topic.  So we’ve got “400+ Ways to Kill a Character” from Clever Girl Helps,  “How to Successfully Kill a Character—the Checklist” from K.M. Weiland,  “How to Kill Your Main Character” from Rhiannon Paille, and “Murder 101—7 Reasons to Kill Your Character” from Robert Smedley.


I was blinking from all the killing, and I’m a murder mystery writer.


All of the posts had excellent points, which is why I shared them.  K.M. Weiland also delves into reasons why you shouldn’t kill a character:



Shocking readers just for the sake of shocking them. (Shock value isn’t without its, well, value, but not every author is Alfred Hitchcock and not every story is Psycho.)
Making readers sad just for the sake of making them sad. (An old saw says, “If they cry, they buy.” But readers never appreciate being tortured without good reason.)
Removing an extraneous character. (I know, I know. I just said that was a good reason. But you have to double-check this one. If the character is extraneous, then you better verify he really belongs in this story in the first place.)

Naturally, as a mystery writer, I kill characters all the time.  I’ve done the math.  At a rate of two bodies a book and I’m on my fourteenth book…that’s 28 bodies I’ve got littered out there.  But my readers expect bodies in these books.  They even enjoy trying to figure out who body number two is (body number one is always disclosed on the back cover).  I write a gentler subgenre, so my victims are usually the result of blunt force trauma, falls, or barely-described poisonings, knifings, or gunshot wounds.  Although the 400+ ways of killing characters post was fascinating to me.


But what series readers don’t usually expect is for main characters in the series to die.  They’ve developed relationships with the recurring cast members and I haven’t broken that covenant with them…yet.  Although our discussion the other day of dark story arcs for series made me mull this over a bit.


But there is one element I think we have to consider—what have we either invested in this character in the past or what potential does this character have to be a good investment for our series? Basically:  does this character have star quality?


I have an example, actually.  I’ve mentioned before that I have an editor who likes outlines and I turn in an outline for each book in the series before writing it.  I’d submitted this particular outline (this was probably 3 years or so ago) and she said she loved it—but she really wanted to keep Miss Sissy. In fact she’d particularly liked Miss Sissy the best among the supporting characters.


Miss Sissy, of course, died in the book’s second act—in the outline.  But that’s the nice thing about outlines…they can be changed.  So I brought Miss Sissy back from the dead and picked another victim.  And the editor made a great call—Miss Sissy ended up being the character I hear most about when I get reader emails for that series.


So, my basic point is—if you’ve got a character with potential for reader popularity, you might want to back off from killing that one.  If it’s a series.   Just saying.  It’s hard enough to create new, lifelike characters for a series…why put in all that labor, create a solid, winning character, and then kill her off for the sake of a minor plot twist?  Then we’re back at the drawing board for the next book in the series, trying to create another well-rounded, lifelike character that readers relate to. Now obviously, if a major plot point or story arc depends on the death of a character…this is just something we have to go through with, regardless.


How can we know which characters instantly resonate with readers?  If you don’t have an editor…it may help to get one (I maintain a free database that has many freelance editors listed).  Otherwise, beta readers are also very helpful—good betas are discerning and honest readers who can provide you with constructive feedback.  There have also, in another feat of synchronicity, been a couple of solid recent posts on betas: “Beta Readers: The Magic Elves of the Publishing World” by Nillu Nasser Stelter and “Where to Find Beta Readers” by Jami Gold.


Have you ever killed a main character?  How and why did you do it? When might you avoid killing off one?


Image: MorgueFile: Penywise


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