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August 27, 2009

Why Mistakes Happen


I worked hard to make More Deaths Than One typo-free, but there are at least two errors in the published novel.

        "I'm Kerry. Kerry Casillas." She eyed the obit-

ary. "How many of those children are yours?

        Bob massaged the back of his neck. "None."

And:

"I thought you were in the jungle of your nightmares."

Bob laid a had on top of hers. "I was."

"Then let's get you out of there. Finish the story." 

Errors in copyediting are easy to make. One website, Regret the Error: Mistakes Happen,

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Published on August 27, 2009 19:34

August 26, 2009

Whew! Now I Feel Safe?


I've been reading a very old book on blogging. For normal purposes, a 2006 copyright isn't that old, but apparently when it comes to the blogosphere, it's so old as to be . . . well, not worthless, but outdated. The only mention of WordPress in the book was the .org version. The .com version (the one most of us have come to rely on) wasn't even mentioned. Is WordPress.com that new? I don't know — I've only been blogging for two years, so anything before September 2007 is prehistoric to me.

Anyway

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Published on August 26, 2009 18:30

August 25, 2009

Writing, Blogging, Promoting — My Aha Moment


Fellow author Dale Cozort recently returned from agent Donald Maass's High Tension Workshop. (Okay, it wasn't recently –  it was back in April, but who's counting?) Cozort reported that according to Maass, the keys to keeping modern readers' interest are finding something fresh — a different way of looking at events — and finding ways of getting the reader to identify with the character or with the scene.

According to The Everything Blogging Book by Aliza Sherman Risdahl, the key to keeping blog

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Published on August 25, 2009 19:27

August 24, 2009

More Blogs Than One


A year ago when I was waiting for my books to be published, I kept myself occupied with setting up a variety of blogs. I told myself I wanted to test blogging platforms so I could help my fellow authors pick the best one for their needs, but that wasn't my excuse for setting up a bunch of WordPress blogs since I was already familiar with the site. The truth is, I became enamored with the custom colorizer, and ended up with five blogs, identical except for color.

The blue blog, this one — Bertram'

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Published on August 24, 2009 18:35

August 23, 2009

Catapulting Me Into BetterSellerdom


In the past week, I received a couple of emails from people asking my advice on how to promote various online activities, I received an invitation to host a seminar on promotion, and I received an invitation to participate in a BlogTalkRadio discussion about creating a successful Facebook group. Apparently, I'm making a name for myself, (albeit slowly) but not as an author. Am I doing something right? Am I going about my self-promotion in the wrong way? I don't know.

The interesting thing — to me

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Published on August 23, 2009 18:28

August 21, 2009

It's a Birthday Party!


No, it's not my birthday, it's the birthday of Second Wind Publishing, LLC. The first book was published exactly one year ago today, and now there are almost thirty, including two of mine (with a third on the way.)

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I have no doubts of the success of Second Wind. Mike Simpson has the uncanny ability of getting his authors involved in the business, challenging us to expand our abilities beyond the scope of writing. He's gotten die-hard thriller writers to edit romances. He's gotten shy authors to d

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Published on August 21, 2009 12:17

August 18, 2009

Keeping It Real in a Fabricated World


Ian O'Neill, the one-time advertising copywriter turned award winning freelance journalist, is the author of Endo, a mystery/suspense novel set in Ontario, Canada. Ian has written for newspaper, magazine, radio, television and once wrote a dirty limerick on a dusty car but didn't sign it. Ian writes:

Writing a fiction novel can be oxymoronic since we fill the fabricated story with facts. In my novel, Endo, I made up a detective, his life, the world around him, but added facts to keep the reader g

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Published on August 18, 2009 13:43

The Magic Of Mysteries: The Art (And Joy) Of Misdirection


Ian O'Neill, the one-time advertising copywriter turned award winning freelance journalist, is the author of Endo, a mystery/suspense novel set in Ontario, Canada. Ian has written for newspaper, magazine, radio, television and once wrote a dirty limerick on a dusty car but didn't sign it. Ian writes:

I worked for Parks and Rec when I was younger and on a rainy day managed to bring in a magician to entertain the kids in our program. It was fascinating to not only watch him perform but also to see

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Published on August 18, 2009 04:18

August 17, 2009

To Trust or Not to Trust?


I recently helped run a short story contest for Second Wind Publishing, LLC — the first contest that was sponsored solely by the company — and it went smoothly. Until last week. That's when we found out one of the finalists had copied a story from another writer who had posted it on the Internet. Whoooo. So not the thing to do!

Deborah J Ledford, a friend and fellow author keeps warning me about posting my writing on the Internet since such episodes are not uncommon, but I still persist in postin

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Published on August 17, 2009 18:58

August 16, 2009

Something Ew and Different


So, did you miss me? I bet you didn't even know I was gone. I went to Las Vegas to a surprise birthday party for my brother, and I couldn't talk about it beforehand since I didn't want to be the one to un-surprise him. It was fun, though the town is wasted on me — I forgot to gamble. I guess I'll have to find another way to get rich. I know! I'll write a book, become a bestselling author, and make millions. Are you laughing, too? It would have been better for me to be a bettor.

I was hoping that

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Published on August 16, 2009 17:41