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Marco Sanchez (Dragondarkness30)
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Now the battle was really happening for everyone the Clan Mother was brave and sacrificed herself by getting shot by the invading men. The flames were getting worse. Omri and his Dad were trying to find a way out safely and were stuck trying to climb over things it was then that they saw Little Bear Bright Stars and the baby he was getting them to safety as well. Omri was wondering if he had forgotten about them.
— Dec 31, 2024 03:21PM
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Marco Sanchez (Dragondarkness30)
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That has to be the weirdest ending about Omri telling his dad that this whole little adventure was over and his mom knew for awhile. She knew about Jessica Charlotte. She knew about the history of it all. She found LittIe Bear's belt wampum and gave it to Omri saying I think this is your friend's and it was now time to put all of this away it was time to move
on to their real lives.
— Dec 31, 2024 05:33PM
on to their real lives.
Marco Sanchez (Dragondarkness30)
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They were in the septic tank outside it had been cleaned out but still smelled. Boone was so furious about being in the tank he was so mad at Patrick for all he put him through with the cat first then this. They brought them inside and gave them a bath cut small towels and soap for them to use and whiskey. Omri had that feeling again he wanted to bring Little Bear back he knew it was over he was done.
— Dec 31, 2024 04:58PM
Marco Sanchez (Dragondarkness30)
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Now Omri was back in his world with his Dad and now realized Patrick had done a really bad thing that may have drowned Boone and his wife in his bathtub. They may have gone down the pipe into the septic tank they now had to find out they opened the lid and called out to them.
— Dec 31, 2024 04:38PM
Marco Sanchez (Dragondarkness30)
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It was now nearing the end of this frightening journey. Omri and his dad were nearly held and strangled. Their captors were shot by Little Bear by bow and arrow. As he tries to escape the blazing fires Little Bear quickly picks them up and puts them in his belt. After he apologizes to Omri how he messed up leaving him behind that they were brothers and that he would be going home very soon.
— Dec 31, 2024 03:58PM
Marco Sanchez (Dragondarkness30)
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There was a battle happening, and there was nothing that Omri or his dad could do they were small. Everyone was running for their lives as their long houses were going up into flames. Women and children were escaping away from the fires but one woman the Clan Mother but why what was she up to or what did she know.
— Dec 31, 2024 02:49PM
Marco Sanchez (Dragondarkness30)
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A little celebration of dancing around the fire just like Little Bear did in Omri's time was coming to an end in his time as he watched a darkness that was no longer dark lit up and someone was coming their enemies were charging on their land. A battle was about to happen.
— Dec 31, 2024 12:44PM
Marco Sanchez (Dragondarkness30)
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Omri was asking Little Bear what the Clan mother thought of him she thought he was a little person who came from the ground as she saw in her dream. There is a lot of dragging on plot in this chapter that have nothing to do with the main part of the story. Omri dad reminded Little Bear that there is much to come for his people as the history books say.
— Dec 31, 2024 11:27AM
Marco Sanchez (Dragondarkness30)
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When Omri and his dad got into the place Little Bear had then Omri got curious he smelled food and took off and ended up getting picked up by a dog he had bruises from it and even the clan mother had noticed him and had him in her grasp but it wasn't until Little Bear rescued him and was very upset because he cared about Omri and he didn't want anything to happen to him. He would cry and his dad would too.
— Dec 31, 2024 10:13AM
Marco Sanchez (Dragondarkness30)
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Little Bear finally gets to tell Omri and his dad the story he wanted to tell them. There was so much going on. It was a battle that he wasn't sure was going to end well. Omri's dad brought with him a book on his people and how they did it in the past how they fought battles. Little Bear was now a giant to them instead of it being them in giant form.
— Dec 30, 2024 07:05PM
Marco Sanchez (Dragondarkness30)
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The slow transition to Little Bear's world and to think of it this could have been done another way why are he and his dad coming into his world completely naked. This is a young adult series. Just because Little Bear's chest was exposed they had no clothes on at all on when, at first they did. Why do we have to read about this at the end of the chapter that they barely got pants on but not a shirt.
— Dec 30, 2024 05:37PM
