Michela Walters’s Reviews > Interference > Status Update
Michela Walters
is 75% done
Ugh, this freaking book. The dialogue is stilted, the first person POV is not well done and I find myself annoyed with their inner thoughts that they wouldn't just have except to bring the reader up to speed about something. Very close to flouncing this one.
— May 17, 2016 11:33AM
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Michela Walters
is 20% done
So much telling and not enough showing so far. I swear the first 3 chapters were the MCs (borderline breaking the 4th wall) bring the reader up to speed on the past 2 Pilot series books. I'm hoping this stops soon and the characters start doing things rather than telling the reader about them.
— May 17, 2016 07:34AM
