Meep’s Reviews > Shadows Fall > Status Update

I guess coffee shop workers don't care about hygiene. A bacon fat poultice covered by long sleeves and no-one comments, it doesn't smell?! Ignoring the night of jacking off and not showering because of poultice.

What are people seeing in this book that I'm not? I've checked and reviews are positive but it's so frustrating.

Both naked for and about to get busy for the first time when one discovers the other has never watched gay porn.
So um everything stops for immediate porn watching!

I'm getting a headache from all the eye-rolling I'm doing. But book sounded so good *pout*

'..when did we become twelve-year-old girls at a sleepover?'
I could answer that, but I'm trying to remain positive.

How old are these trained detectives?
They read like teenagers and are about that professional too.

'Anyway back to my point'
You had a point? Really?

These characters don't add up.
The fancy house design doesn't match the stoner and gypsy who live there.

I keep being reminded of the freebie by Zebbie 'With Intent' with less smooth writing and added Romany info dump.

Liked the idea of the fic but debating a refund.

Great autopsies to show both how tough and human you are detective. And reading the breakdown the connection is BLATANTLY OBVIOUS yet you're still calling it a hunch they're connected?!
AND is it to early to think I know who dunnit? *sigh*

So we have a leather jacket wearing Detective Hale and Titus takes Adderall - anyone see where my mind goes?
No other similarities but..