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Having a hard time with this...premise is interesting, but the writing is bad. There's really a lack of emotion from all the characters and responses to trauma are completely unrealistic (ie, Madallya and her parents basically act like robots after she's raped; real parents would be screaming, cussing, crying, making threats, etc.). The fight scenes have such basic writing and bad sentence structure.
Dec 11, 2024 09:23PM
Seven Crows (Killian Delaney, #1)

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