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Back half of this feels like it's going much faster.

YES! Now we're talking. Fuckin PROBLEMS, yes! Much better.
(looked over my short list for something to read between arcs and couldn't make up my mind, so just gonna keep going with this)

Ah, end of the first arc. Have to decide whether to pause here.

comparing 1st to 2nd quarter of this beast, consider me shocked to conclude including sports in a sports romance has somehow made it less boring! 🤯🤔

almost half way.

drama level has improved

It confuses my brain when story time lines up w actual time. Holidays, like parents, shouldn't exist in story world. But now it's trying to bore me to death with sex again.

ok, training camp and preseason bit was a nice break from the monotony, and then we got a nice bit of drama with chaz and the whole fuckboi thing. will it last?

Oh, a second tiny spat. These boys need David or Robbie to come teach them how to drama. This is book is literally the length of The Count of Monte Cristo, but with all the plot twists and tension of Richard Scarry's Cars and Trucks and Things That Go! And I'll have you know I spent several minutes on that joke trying to think of a children's book that wasn't MORE dramatic than this. :(