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Jaylee
Jaylee is 38% done
How much I care about magic school: 0%
May 03, 2016 03:41PM
Losing Ground

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Jaylee
Jaylee is 42% done
From a long description of teaching someone to use magic to a long scene about getting up and making pancakes. ugh. dnf.
May 03, 2016 07:51PM
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Jaylee
Jaylee is 32% done
do these people have jobs or
May 02, 2016 05:09PM
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Jaylee
Jaylee is 15% done
So far, no real worldbuilding to speak of. Magic is discussed in super vague terms, and there are so many named characters who don't really seem important to the plot. Kinda bored.
Apr 30, 2016 06:02PM
Losing Ground


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