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Jaylee
is 15% done
So far, no real worldbuilding to speak of. Magic is discussed in super vague terms, and there are so many named characters who don't really seem important to the plot. Kinda bored.
— Apr 30, 2016 06:02PM
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Jaylee
is 42% done
From a long description of teaching someone to use magic to a long scene about getting up and making pancakes. ugh. dnf.
— May 03, 2016 07:51PM
