Michelle, the Bookshelf Stalker’s Reviews > Brightest Kind of Darkness > Status Update

Great book, great twist, love the characters. One little pet peeve... dialogue... authors.. have your beta readers read your dialogue out loud, if it sounds too formal, too "adult", then it is... teens talk like teens, they don't say "will not", they say "no I won't", they don't say "I cannot" they say "I can't". Other than that, I love the book.