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Jordyn
is on page 48 of 312
Worried about the pacing being too quick. I like a wordie book. Tell me about the weather or the color of the walls. What were the girls in the bathroom gossiping about? What color is Keller’s maternity suit. What does Mr Local Detective look like other than his polo tucked into his pants???
— Jul 07, 2024 08:20PM
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Jordyn
is on page 118 of 312
“…a guy in a suit” “turd brown” “a man sits behind a cluttered desk” Pretty sure my 13-year-old brother could come up with better descriptors 🙄
— Jul 12, 2024 06:58PM
Jordyn
is on page 84 of 312
Plot is fine. Still not a fan of the writing style. Not enough words.
— Jul 09, 2024 06:38PM
