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Instead of dreading, not looking forward to could have been used, dreading makes it it sound like the next thing is horrible. Carnage is a very brutal word, this making the scene sound like it is in disrepair.
— Feb 02, 2016 07:47PM
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I never have time that is specifically carved out so that I can read, so on my own time I have to remember that I have to read.
— Feb 29, 2016 10:05AM
Grace
is on page 270 of 360
When I read I read lots and lots of pages, more than what is required for every update. I don't read very often, but I really like to read and I wish I had more time to do so. Most of the time I read in the living room or in my room on the weekends around the middle of the day. My mom reads a lot which helps remind me to read my independent reading book.
— Feb 29, 2016 10:05AM
Grace
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Four and Nine are sparring because Four says that he is Pittacus Lore, but Nine disagrees. They have also decided to go either to New Mexico, or Paradise depending on who wins. Scorching, dreading, and carnage are three words that add emotion to the text. Instead of scorching, the author could have used hot, but this adds intensity to the scene.
— Feb 02, 2016 07:47PM

