2percentright’s Reviews > Down Range > Status Update

Maybe the universal mind had some ideas, but I was too loopy to access it.

The author forgot that he removed the main character's super power a couple chapters ago

“No, infant, we are no myth. Distance and time have no meaning to such as us.”

And yet, you did nothing when the dinosaurs did the exact same thing. Jesus, Rick, the plot holes in this terrible book just keep getting wider

"but Vicky didn’t. That was probably why the entirety of the one and a half companies"

Ah. Ok. So Vicky is a fucking idiot. This is like the stupid scene in 300 when the Spartans broke their own phalanx and charged willy nilly into the Persian army

Needed to have a feel for her velocity to bring it down enough for this landing to be survivable.

What? Why that fuck would you 'land' her? She's a fucking SPACE ship. Push her out of the atmosphere so she can regain her footing and repair her damage. She's useless to you on the ground, not to mention a 1g will likely buckle and ruin her skeleton

Hey. Remember earlier in the book when the AI that did Cam's power said that the AI on this world was one the dinosaurs created without copying a human's brain?

I only ask because the author forgot that plot point

I don’t have any time for something as superstitious as the idea of an immortal soul.”

Difference is there's actually evidence of those things. A "soul" on the other hand there's zero evidence