Daniel’s Reviews > Lessons in Timing > Status Update

I like this a lot. Ace guy confirmed. No new wordcrimes. We just had class on a Saturday, followed by another Saturday though.

No real unpardonable word crimes since the last update. I like it. Two couples in the works. Maybe one ace guy? Is that why I own this? It's one of my rare preorders from a new author and I have no recollection of why I preordered it. 1st person switching between all 4 of them and no trouble at all keeping them straight so good job on voice.

So... the voice here is charming, delightful, and then all of the sudden there'll be an absolutely stunning, WOAH! STOP THE BOOK level wtf word choice. 4 of them so far. Besides the mangled idiom on page 1, we've had "Norsemen University" (in L.A.), "DQ comic con" DQ? Fucking Dairy Queen's holding comic conventions now? Adult man calling his college age son "honey". WTF

Ok, I'm ignoring the egregious mutilation of an idiomatic expression at the end of the second paragraph and giving this ago. Cross your fingers :)