Cassidy Laffey’s Reviews > The Summer I Turned Pretty > Status Update

Poor jeremiah, and its kinda shady of taylor to have been toying with all three of the boys. I feel bad for Belly in this case, but she still is shady too.

the writing style is hard to follow. The jump backs are confusing and the tense feels a little scrambled. her dating cam cameron is kinda crazy too. There has been no connection with her and conrad, but her and Jeremiah are actually really cute. Hes so fun.

okay now they are calling him cam cameron

also steven left and it feels weird just being belly and Conrad and Jeremiah

They dont call him cam cameron :(

also this is lacking emotion, i feel like theyre just telling me what is happening and im not really connected to any of the characters (the show helps with this but still)

The pacing is also a little quick for my liking, but its still fun and cute

Pretty shallow characters so far, but it def feels like a 15 year old wrote this. Its cute but not much has happened yet