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So far, exposition is a little awkward, writing a bit too wordy at times (though that may just be a preference thing), and mythology a little awkward (I believe it's backflipped between prologue and ch.4). But some nice raw emotions coming through, and imagery.
— Nov 10, 2015 01:55PM
So far, exposition is a little awkward, writing a bit too wordy at times (though that may just be a preference thing), and mythology a little awkward (I believe it's backflipped between prologue and ch.4). But some nice raw emotions coming through, and imagery.
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