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Megan Swidecki
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Having a hard time getting through the lead up. Hoping it gets better once the 'battles' start.
— Oct 06, 2015 09:26PM
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Megan Swidecki
is on page 54 of 316
Concept is alright, even if it borrows some portions pretty heavily from Sci-fi before it (Star Trek, stormtroopers). Writing is well paced, but needs some polishing. Seems like the backstory could have been laid better, either before or immediately after the initial scene, instead of scattered about in brief flashbacks or 'insightful' moments.
— Oct 04, 2015 09:30PM
