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is on page 159 of 272
HOW DO YOU FUMBLE A GIRL IN LESS THAN 3 PARAGRAPHS I DONT UNDERSTAND!!! anyway... i feel like theres good plot development but at the same time there are so many missing pieces and holes that easily could have been filled had it not been for the earlier filler chapters. the timing of the last 5 chapters was really weird and hard to follow, but i AM invested, so theres something good at least.
— Jan 01, 2024 01:03AM
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bug
is on page 229 of 272
ooh :/ do not love how we went from potentially wholesome story ab overcoming to... graphic descriptions of suicide followed by an overuse of the T slur :/
— Jan 02, 2024 08:41AM
bug
is on page 205 of 272
um.. what the fuck? that was a lot of information to put in 20 pages and for it to all be... irrelevant, basically? im going to finish the book because im close to the end but i am. not happy
— Jan 02, 2024 08:32AM
bug
is on page 182 of 272
in 5 very short chapters, miles managed to:
make his friend drive over for a 5 minute talk, get together with eliza, eat her out, break up with her, and have a psychotic break.
while im invested in the plot, i HATED how the last 5 chapters were plagued with "elizas tiny waist" and just how small eliza is. also. mega points off for introducing a character with my dead name. :)
— Jan 02, 2024 12:11AM
make his friend drive over for a 5 minute talk, get together with eliza, eat her out, break up with her, and have a psychotic break.
while im invested in the plot, i HATED how the last 5 chapters were plagued with "elizas tiny waist" and just how small eliza is. also. mega points off for introducing a character with my dead name. :)
bug
is on page 97 of 272
SO LIKE. it has me kicking my feet and giggling to a degree. however. i still care very little for miles. still to many uses of "fuck" and hes also. kind of an ass. but im invested in the story enough to keep going so... there's that
— Dec 30, 2023 12:03AM
bug
is on page 76 of 272
i cant help but feel like i would like this more if there werent random uses of "fuck" in every sentence... and this is coming from me...
— Dec 29, 2023 11:38PM
bug
is on page 67 of 272
man. its just such a hard read, and not bc of the subject matter. the way its written gets worse with each chapwr, the dialogue makes me want to rip my eyes out and overall reads like the author learned about curse words laat week and feels the need to use them in every other sentence... plot wise... slow but managable i suppose
— Dec 29, 2023 12:54AM
bug
is on page 41 of 272
so like i feel bad for the guy, i rly do, i just cannot find myself empathizing with him at ALL :/
— Dec 29, 2023 12:30AM
bug
is on page 30 of 272
cannot lie. i hate the writing style so bad but im determined to finish ONE (1) book this year
— Dec 29, 2023 12:09AM
