in 5 very short chapters, miles managed to:
make his friend drive over for a 5 minute talk, get together with eliza, eat her out, break up with her, and have a psychotic break.
while im invested in the plot, i HATED how the last 5 chapters were plagued with "elizas tiny waist" and just how small eliza is. also. mega points off for introducing a character with my dead name. :)
— Jan 02, 2024 12:11AM
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