Laurens.Little.Library’s Reviews > Bend Toward the Sun > Status Update

Nahhhh the whole family conspiring to help the ex? And these are THRITY YEAR OLDS?

I’d never talk to them again.

This is starting to make very little sense. Two months has passed and yet the reader isn’t privy to any of the supposed conversations that must have happened.

In lieu of that, we have to just… believe that there’s all this growing tension between them?

Also, I need this man to stop getting hard in public. Like please settle down. You can show a character is attracted to the FMC without resorting to—that.

Looooving the writing so far, and both narrators have voices like honey 🤌🏼🤌🏼