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Laurens.Little.Library
is 40% done
This has improved significantly. The magic system and worldbuilding, once you get your head around things, are low-grade fascinating.
The whole plot revolving around a brutal horse racing completion definitely has my attention.
Including Jewish-coded characters and how they’re discriminated against adds a needed layer of depth to the overall story.
And there’s a demisexual character 🥰
— Sep 13, 2023 12:10PM
The whole plot revolving around a brutal horse racing completion definitely has my attention.
Including Jewish-coded characters and how they’re discriminated against adds a needed layer of depth to the overall story.
And there’s a demisexual character 🥰
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Laurens.Little.Library
is 81% done
I’m sadly finding the character work quite weak. And I promise you, it’s not because of the use of 3rd person limited. There’s so much going on and yet I’m grasping at straws to find endearing qualities of the characters in order to care more about what’s happening to them.
In theory, I should be feeling a lot more than I am given the exciting premise of this novel
— Sep 14, 2023 11:59AM
In theory, I should be feeling a lot more than I am given the exciting premise of this novel
Laurens.Little.Library
is 7% done
*actually listening to the ALC*
ngl the worldbuilding is heavyyyyy 🫠 It’s been difficult doing this without the physical book, highlights, tabs, and references. There are just soooo many names that mean nothing to someone new to the book
— Sep 13, 2023 03:55AM
ngl the worldbuilding is heavyyyyy 🫠 It’s been difficult doing this without the physical book, highlights, tabs, and references. There are just soooo many names that mean nothing to someone new to the book
