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Margie
Margie is 15% done
Very very annoying start … we have met the FMC and she was okay until her dialogue started consisting of saying the name of the MMC over and over again without any context at all. Have I mentioned it is annoying? Because I could repeat that five more times and possibly reach low double digits on the number of times this book insists on saying the full name of someone the reader has not met yet.
Jun 08, 2023 03:16PM
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Margie
Margie is 30% done
The annoying part is getting … a little better? Maybe?
Jun 08, 2023 08:56PM
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