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I'm having a hard time with the flirting. How is a man who looks eleven supposed to also look "ruggedly handsome?" Rick may sound mentally mature, but let's not forget that he looks like a child.

— Apr 19, 2015 06:04PM

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Ash is on page 47 of 344

I LOVED this chapter! However, I studied Biology and Chemistry in college, and I wonder if all the science talk might bore those who don't enjoy the sciences as much as I do.

— Apr 06, 2015 06:37PM

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Rick has a momentary thought regarding the ramifications of nearly irradiating further evolution in humans. I hope this is visited again in more detail as it is something that has been weighing on me as I've been reading this.

— Apr 06, 2015 06:15PM

Ash is on page 38 of 344

"If a particular attribute was more suited to its environment than other another organism's attributes..." Tripped over this bit, but overall this has been pretty well edited as far as I can tell at this point.

— Apr 06, 2015 06:11PM