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People, help me out here: hoe old is somebody in the 9th grade supposed to be?
— Apr 28, 2011 10:04AM
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Brody, stop your (unintentional?) flirting with Mia, goddamnit!
— Apr 29, 2011 08:36PM
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I'm really liking the potential of this, but I don't get who's talking to who and what's happening half of the time. The paragraphs are separated where they shouldn't be (mid monologue) and attached when there's a jump from one scene to another. It takes me out of an otherwise good story.
— Apr 28, 2011 11:56PM
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Brody was something of an accessory; people invited him, he came, and that was the extent of his interaction. Kehkehkeh. I love this already! :)
— Apr 28, 2011 10:32AM
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Apr 28, 2011 10:11AM
15 babe, Hey do you want the Just Hit Send file?
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I never know that either. You only have 8 grades over here and then you're in high school. So I always end up Googling it. Or just wait until they mention an actual number.
15 is 9th and it goes through 12th
Now you've just confused me. So you're 15 in 9th,10th,11th and 12th grade? I must have misunderstood that.
Lauraadriana wrote: "15 babe, Hey do you want the Just Hit Send file?"Please!
Valentina, I think LA means that you're 15 in 9th great and it goes up to 12th grade in where you're 18. (Right?)
Mel wrote: "Lauraadriana wrote: "15 babe, Hey do you want the Just Hit Send file?"
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Valentina, I think LA means that you're 15 in 9th great and it goes up to 12th grade in where you're 18. (Right?)"
Yep, that's what I meant. thanks Mel :O)
Please!
Valentina, I think LA means that you're 15 in 9th great and it goes up to 12th grade in where you're 18. (Right?)"
Yep, that's what I meant. thanks Mel :O)

