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I think that if my main character Lena went to jail she would probably be going to jail for the cure not working on her because the cure didn't work for her mom so it probably wouldn't work on her also. I also think she would go to jail for going somewhere past the curfew because she has been sneaking out of the house to go places and meet up with people.

I kind of hate the main character Lena because she doesn't take a lot of risks and when she meets someone new she kind of gets choked up and doesn't say anything and just opens and closes her mouth. I understand that she is shy and thinks that the cure will help her but if the cure doesn't work how will she be able to talk to people without getting choked up.

Something I didn't like in my book would probably be how much it mentions how many times Lena gets the dream of her mother's death, I understand how it's an important factor to her but it doesn't need to get mentioned every time she sleeps.

One of the supporting characters in my book is Lena's aunt and since her evaluation is coming up her aunt is kind of pressuring Lena and telling her what say and what not to say for each question that they ask. Her aunt is also making Lena practice over and over just so she won't get the answers wrong since this day is really important.