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Dan
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I just don’t understand how Adam keeps saying Ben is sort of Jewish—as far as we know Ben is Jewish even by Orthodox halakha, so who does Adam think he is saying sort of just because Ben wasn’t raised in much of a community? I truly don’t get it—if the author wanted this to be an issue, why not establish Adam as Orthodox and make Ben or his mom a liberal convert?
— Dec 26, 2022 09:46AM
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Dan
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See all they had to do was move this Christmas tree argument to the beginning of the book and Adam’s attitude throughout would have made way more sense.
— Dec 26, 2022 10:02AM
Dan
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I once saw a post talk about writing your characters like you want them to get a good grade in therapy, and that’s very much what’s happening here.
— Dec 26, 2022 09:25AM
Dan
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I was hoping to get actual hockey in this book, but all I’ve gotten so far is hockey players harassing the coach about his love life. At least tell me how the tournament is going!
— Dec 26, 2022 08:15AM
Dan
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I don’t understand these characters perspectives on Judaism. Adam assumes Ben isn’t Jewish because the bakery is kosher style rather than certified and because he doesn’t know sufganiyot is specifically plural? And Ben in insecure in his Judaism because he’s MORE traditional than the members of the congregation he attends? I don’t get it.
— Dec 23, 2022 03:28PM
