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is 30% done
It not bad but very repetitive.
Also it’s skips POVs mid action or thought and it often refers to the other character by name when the two MCs did know each other’s names yet.
— Oct 08, 2022 11:41PM
Also it’s skips POVs mid action or thought and it often refers to the other character by name when the two MCs did know each other’s names yet.
