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Midniteillusion
is 30% done
It not bad but very repetitive.
Also it’s skips POVs mid action or thought and it often refers to the other character by name when the two MCs did know each other’s names yet.
— Oct 08, 2022 11:41PM
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Also it’s skips POVs mid action or thought and it often refers to the other character by name when the two MCs did know each other’s names yet.
Crystal
is 52% done
Very “tell” not good at “show.” Writing is kinda juvenile and it’s not exactly what I was looking for. Characters are very simple minded.
But kinda curious about this will all unfold so onward.
— Mar 24, 2019 11:13AM
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But kinda curious about this will all unfold so onward.
