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William
is 52% done
The story seems to have heavy characterization and plot development, but is not as fast paced as I hoped. I would seriously like to know just how much Canyon, Jones, the husband, and the have you figured it out yet phrase fit into the story. I anticipate another affair in the story and for canyon to be abducting the artists or persuading them to become It and be included in back road, indie art shows.
— Dec 11, 2014 07:24PM
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William
is 70% done
And there is no surprise about these actions at all. I bet they will continue.
— Dec 14, 2014 07:30PM
William
is 68% done
I feel different feelings on how the relationships between the characters are set up.
— Dec 14, 2014 07:20PM
